Thanks for the reply :D
It's my own - if it was for a friend I'd suggest someone else to do the pixel art :P Because it's my own I'm willing to spend some time learning how to do pixel art (and maybe in the future have someone do a digitally painted version).
Originally posted by Hapiel
Excessive dithering makes everything look very textured and a bit dirty, it might not be necessary at all on the ape! Yeah, that makes sense; I feel I've done it to cover up the fact I don't have a clear definition of what I'm drawing :P
Think I'll remove the dithering then. I also had done it to keep the palette simpler - though I'm probably better off just using a few more colours here.
Originally posted by Hapiel
As for the piece itself: What is the pink thing in the background? Is it clouds, rocks...? Why is the sky bright with dark stars? Why is the horizon curved (inconsistently on the left side)
Thanks for all of these. It helps me understand what someone else sees when they're looking at this!
Originally posted by Hapiel
What is the pink thing in the background? Is it clouds, rocks...? The pink stuff was supposed to be clouds (or maybe smoke), but I can see how it appears like rocks also. So I ought to fix that. Should I just try to look at how other people structure clouds / smoke pixel art-wise?
Originally posted by Hapiel
Why is the sky bright with dark stars? The sky being bright with dark stars would be a bad design choice :D I thought about making the sky get slightly darker towards the top and show lighter stars that way. Maybe that'd be better?
Originally posted by Hapiel
Why is the horizon curved (inconsistently on the left side)? If I made the horizon evenly curved on both sides would that be better? Or would it look more natural to have it flat? I know realistically the horizon would be flat but I was trying to kinda make it an overview of Earth (even if that doesn't jive with the foreground perspective).
When I flip everything horizontally (to see work with fresh eyes) I can see how off things are!
Thanks again. I'll reupload this as 1:1 version.
Edit: Should I also keep the 2:1 version up as well, or is it better just to post one size?
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