[feedback][cc][wip]-week03
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Topic: [feedback][cc][wip]-week03
Posted By: Iancul1981
Subject: [feedback][cc][wip]-week03
Date Posted: 04 April 2018 at 1:00am
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Hello again,
Lessons learned so far: -avoid dithering on low-res work, avoid dithering in general -avoid outlines on low-res work -choose a light source and be consistent with the lighting This week I started hard trying to draw a bored person, but after two days of trying I gave up. I currently made this, and am quite happy with it, but I am sure someone will have some good cristicism for me: 1. Wine 
For this week's second entry, it's a Guy Fawkes mask that I want to entry to the competition... I used this as a https://onepeterfive.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/11/vendetta-guy-fawkes-mask-on-black-849146-1500x844.jpg - model , but am not totally sure what I could do to make it look better. 2. Remember, remember the 5th of November! 
Thank you, Iancu |
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Posted By: NancyGold
Date Posted: 05 April 2018 at 2:30am
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1. these speculars could be less contrast. 2. specular at the bottom of the bottle is questionable. Where does the light come from? 3. That diagonal specular at the bottle's neck suggests that it is chipped. In general these perfect shapes would produce perfect speculars. 4. wine glass could use some outline or a more contrast background. Here I tried to fix some lights on wine glass, also adding additional red shade to make the shape more pronounced  |