Ninja Girl with Dawnbringer 16 palette
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Category: Pixel Art
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Topic: Ninja Girl with Dawnbringer 16 palette
Posted By: JaumeAlcazo
Subject: Ninja Girl with Dawnbringer 16 palette
Date Posted: 23 September 2018 at 10:31am
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I've been playing a little today. Any thoughts on how to improve?
Inspired a bit by 2b from Nier Automata. 
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Replies:
Posted By: ihatemundays
Date Posted: 27 September 2018 at 6:16am
| I like the art style from the neck down, but the cartoonish look of the face looks a little out of place. But I could see this character either being a Castlevania-esque character or in a fighting game. Great job! |
Posted By: JaumeAlcazo
Date Posted: 28 September 2018 at 12:26pm
| Thanks for the comment! :) |
Posted By: dpixel
Date Posted: 07 October 2018 at 12:18am
 Just messin around. The db16 is a great palette. Aside from anatomy issues, you have a lot of colors that blend with similar shades which don't read well. Define your shapes with as few colors as possible. Less is more. Every pixel counts. ------------- |
Posted By: JaumeAlcazo
Date Posted: 08 October 2018 at 5:23am
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OOoohh! O_o! You killed me.
This is much more better. sh*t, this is hard. I will study the piece. |
Posted By: dpixel
Date Posted: 08 October 2018 at 9:10am
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Some other tips: -Think in terms of pixel clusters. -Try to avoid single pixels unless it serves a purpose. -Keep the light source consistent. (2 light sources can be tricky as you have here) A good place to start a study is comparing the light ball. Notice the clusters. My edit is still a little on the sloppy side, but you get the idea. ------------- |