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Constructive criticism needed for my last 3 PDs

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Category: Pixel Art
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Printed Date: 27 May 2019 at 2:35am


Topic: Constructive criticism needed for my last 3 PDs
Posted By: Chironyx
Subject: Constructive criticism needed for my last 3 PDs
Date Posted: 18 February 2019 at 10:30am
Heya guys!
Last week I wanted to test some new animation techniques, and did it through participating in 3 consecutive Pixel Dailies, here they are!:







I would love to hear all of your opinions, the good, the bad and the ugly.
Hearing what's good / what you like not just as an artist but as a viewer, would also be great help!



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Posted By: snv
Date Posted: 19 February 2019 at 5:54am
That disco mirror ball is hard to read. I suggest you to make it large, then flat-shade each of its mirror tiles with separate brightness, maybe add some bloom or sparks. Or maybe you can put the scene as whole inside one huge disco ball. Also rays light rays could be made less jerky and more readable too.

Here is some reference footage:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XXA-bQj5n9Q
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VSC6tVgz5Co
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1us9WiqTtB8



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