WIP BWRY Challenge Feedback
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
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Printed Date: 10 September 2025 at 11:54pm
Topic: WIP BWRY Challenge Feedback
Posted By: Edgaretto
Subject: WIP BWRY Challenge Feedback
Date Posted: 30 January 2020 at 4:28am
Any feedback is apreciated. I'm new at this |
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Posted By: NancyGold
Date Posted: 02 February 2020 at 12:02pm
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1. The camel anatomy a bit strange. Especially humps. Looks like a mix between a bactrian and a dromedary camels. 2. The yellow sky is out of place, unless you have a sand storm. But if it is indeed sandstorm, vision would be really foggy. 3. Pyramids have some projection problems. Same with the road. They look non-eucldeian. Remember, euclidean projection is linear. 4. The palette hurts eyes. It is both low contrast and bland. I've edited your art with alternative palette and sky.  |
Posted By: Edgaretto
Date Posted: 05 February 2020 at 6:25pm
| Thanks |