Skeleton Spearman Sprite
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Category: Pixel Art
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Topic: Skeleton Spearman Sprite
Posted By: Ddawg3000
Subject: Skeleton Spearman Sprite
Date Posted: 16 April 2021 at 12:51pm
I'm trying to learn how to make decent sprites for games. This attempt looks much better than what I have been producing. All critique welcome. |
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Posted By: mauricio-fidalgo
Date Posted: 26 April 2021 at 3:46am
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I like the original concept but I think it could benefit from some references.
Like making the pelvis look more visible and the arms a bit lower than the ribcage. The back elbow is a bit too squared, and it is off model compared to the front one. the knee bones could be a bit more bulby as well. On the color side of things, I think the eye sockets could be darker to make the redness pop out a bit more so it looks a little bit more and improving the readability. 
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Posted By: Chentzilla
Date Posted: 28 April 2021 at 4:59am
I think that even for a standing stance, the pose is too stiff and there's too many straight vertical lines. Make his arms and legs bend a bit (they also look too thick for bare bones — and the real skeleton's chest is actually see-thru). Here's my attempt at more relaxed pose/more skeletal skeleton.
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