The Pixel Band (WIP)
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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 12 September 2025 at 8:37am
Topic: The Pixel Band (WIP)
Posted By: Acke
Subject: The Pixel Band (WIP)
Date Posted: 04 August 2006 at 1:56pm
I'm planning on making a short animation of a pixel rock band. A mate
of mine is gonna make me a short looping rock/metal track to sync the
animations too. Here are the two first members. Lead Guitarist and basist. Crits are welcome ------------- Get this big yellow beetle scuttling towards my destiny... |
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Posted By: iSTVAN
Date Posted: 04 August 2006 at 6:19pm
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Looking okay so far, although they mihgt be lacking slightly in structure, which would make it harder to animate them down the track (pun intended).
I'd also have a look at their proportions. I think you need to make a darker fold area under the second guy's knees to show that he is bending, otherwise he looks out of proportion. Is there any particular band you're modelling this on? ------------- Listen to what the flower people say... 
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Posted By: Acke
Date Posted: 06 August 2006 at 2:36pm
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iSTVAN: thanx for mentioning the knees. fixed that now. i think... Update  ------------- Get this big yellow beetle scuttling towards my destiny... |
Posted By: iSTVAN
Date Posted: 06 August 2006 at 5:38pm
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Ooh, something else that I just picked up on was the head and neckline of the second guitarist. I only just read it as him looking at his left hand sliding up the guitar, until now I just thought he was staring down, which looked very awkward. I'd try structuring the hair more to show the direction of the head and perhaps making it darker on the right side where the ear touches the shoulder.
EDIT: Nice start on the Mr. T drummer aswell. ------------- Listen to what the flower people say...
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Posted By: Skull
Date Posted: 07 August 2006 at 2:18am
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Originally posted by iSTVAN EDIT: Nice start on the Mr. T drummer aswell. It's blatently Zangief. ------------- |
Posted By: iSTVAN
Date Posted: 07 August 2006 at 3:18am
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Originally posted by Skull
Originally posted by iSTVAN EDIT: Nice start on the Mr. T drummer aswell. It's blatently Zangief. Whatever. We didn't all play Streetfighter you know. ------------- Listen to what the flower people say...
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Posted By: Skull
Date Posted: 07 August 2006 at 6:08am
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Originally posted by iSTVAN Originally posted by Skull
Originally posted by iSTVAN EDIT: Nice start on the Mr. T drummer aswell. It's blatently Zangief. Whatever. We didn't all play Streetfighter you know. Then, I will have to kill you. Back to the pixels, I like the idea and looks pretty cool, but I'm not too sure about the Ying-Yang Symbol. ------------- |
Posted By: fil_razorback
Date Posted: 07 August 2006 at 7:16am
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Don't forget to put a keyboard player =) These tend to be forgotten |
Posted By: E-Magination
Date Posted: 07 August 2006 at 8:31am
| The arms look messed up because the lines are to thick. |
Posted By: Acke
Date Posted: 07 August 2006 at 9:26am
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iSTVAN: ill fix that Skull: No that you mention it, he does look a bit like Zangeif... hmmm fil_razorback: hmmm. i MIGHT add one of those. E-Magination: care to elaborate? ------------- Get this big yellow beetle scuttling towards my destiny... |
Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 07 August 2006 at 9:48am
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The muscle lines on the middle guy's arms are too dark and amke his arm look segmented there. Pretty good overall, so far. ------------- http://pixelmonkey.ensellitis.com"> 
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