Pool Scene
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 09 September 2025 at 5:52pm
Topic: Pool Scene
Posted By: cancrizans
Subject: Pool Scene
Date Posted: 04 September 2021 at 2:58am
 (143x176, 16 colours) Going a bit crazy from staring at this for so long. I can't tell if it's anywhere close to ready for the gallery and just needs a bit of cleanup or if it's super messy but it's burned in my retinas so deep I've lost the ability to tell. I would really appreciate any comments or suggestions. Main concern is the bushes near the edge of the pool that I must have reworked around a thousand times, but the water gets me scratching my head too.
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Replies:
Posted By: Maye
Date Posted: 04 September 2021 at 7:51am
| The border of pool looks to flat in comparison the rest, can put a line ever X pixels. So it look more like ceramic. |
Posted By: turesiht
Date Posted: 04 September 2021 at 11:33am
| It's a fine piece! I would remove the blue pixels in the shadow in the bottom part of the image, I think they contrast too much. And maybe some stray pixels here and there. Good job overall! |
Posted By: cancrizans
Date Posted: 04 September 2021 at 10:49pm
| Thanks guys, then I think I'll try to implement your suggestions, and do some cleanup and it should be good to go! |