Revise Revise Revise
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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 10 September 2025 at 1:01am
Topic: Revise Revise Revise
Posted By: Gyeff
Subject: Revise Revise Revise
Date Posted: 10 May 2022 at 9:16am
https://imgur.com/um8eo2Mhttps://imgur.com/um8eo2Mhttps://imgur.com/um8eo2Mhttps://imgur.com/um8eo2M I'm stuck in a loop of revising my base sprites. The problem is that at any moment they look good, but every time I look back at pre-revision works (that looked good to me at the time) they look horrendous to me and I don't know why I thought they were any good. I'm mainly looking for critiques about consistency (especially height/mass) and colors and if certain shapes look off. |
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Posted By: Gyeff
Date Posted: 16 May 2022 at 2:59pm
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Made a lot of revisions in order to try to improve mass consistency. Do the feet look too big? I'm thinking about making them smaller. What do you think?  |
Posted By: Gyeff
Date Posted: 18 May 2022 at 11:08pm
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First time trying portrait  |
Posted By: Zizka
Date Posted: 05 June 2022 at 5:48am
| I'd say my issue is that the eye in the portrait is of a different style than the character. I think Final Fantasy Tactics managed to transition from one version to another well. |
Posted By: Limes
Date Posted: 12 July 2022 at 6:50pm
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Originally posted by Zizka
I'd say my issue is that the eye in the portrait is of a different style than the character. I think Final Fantasy Tactics managed to transition from one version to another well. 
Edit with Zizka's point. ------------- |
Posted By: Greycloak
Date Posted: 21 July 2022 at 7:19pm
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I think the rounded feet are a bit cuter, but the sharper feet are more "realistic". Either way I think it is a small detail though. The base sprites already look quite good. The portrait feels like it could use some more work though. Since you seem to be going for a FFT style I'd probably study how they designed their portraits.
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