[Feedback] Asuka Langley (Evangelion)
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Printed Date: 10 September 2025 at 5:34pm
Topic: [Feedback] Asuka Langley (Evangelion)
Posted By: Maye
Subject: [Feedback] Asuka Langley (Evangelion)
Date Posted: 07 September 2022 at 2:40pm
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So, this is the first time I try do a character in a large size and I think on make this Asuka Langley from Evangelion, as is the first time I have some dobouts and mistakes and I am here to ask for little help of the great artist.
Reference image: 
https://imgur.com/a/B7ByNnq Pixel art: 
https://imgur.com/a/cmRhQAv -My most big fear is the face, so, have some recommendations for it? -Have some recommendation about the body? -Im still working with the hair. VERY, VERY THANKS for your time and help. |
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Posted By: NancyGold
Date Posted: 08 September 2022 at 1:25am
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You messed up the eyes, moved nose to the left, and and the mouth is more pronounced and has a different expression. You also botched the contrast, by making the suit lighter, so now it appears glowing, and distracts attention from the face, which was the brightest part of the original. Hair is the same - too bright. The only bright thing about the original hair was the specular reflection. Right hip has strange shadow deviating from the anatomy. Here is a quick edit  -> |
Posted By: Maye
Date Posted: 08 September 2022 at 7:11am
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WoW! really impress how small changes can do a big improvement, reall thanks for the time and help.
You are totally right with all the face things. I was thinking about the suit too, think the same. The color hair was more place holder for the shape. Once again really thanks for the help, I gonna work on the hair and hope you can some time to check it later. |
Posted By: Maye
Date Posted: 30 September 2022 at 10:31am
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Well!
Here's the update of Asuka 
https://imgur.com/iwqWlf9 All ideas, reviews, comments, help are welcome. |