2 new (Anatomy) (PHead)
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Topic: 2 new (Anatomy) (PHead)
Posted By: VictorR
Subject: 2 new (Anatomy) (PHead)
Date Posted: 17 September 2006 at 11:01pm
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 And this is a little something else I made. I was browsing the galerries and came upon a big one so I made a little mini one:) I copied the colors from the original so all the credit for that goes to him. The guys supposed to be flexing on this one, his left arm didnt come out too well.
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Posted By: Saboteur
Date Posted: 17 September 2006 at 11:07pm
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To my understanding, the pecs are usually further out than the shoulders, which means they'd overlap them, kinda. M'iunno what I'm talking about. I just know I'm right.
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Posted By: Souly
Date Posted: 17 September 2006 at 11:39pm
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You've got the pecks MUCH too high on the first one. And the face is much too pointy. ------------- 
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Posted By: Okko
Date Posted: 18 September 2006 at 3:50am
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Someone said that even beginner advice could b useful, so here I go :)
On the second character, the head looks flat compare to the body.
By the way, the rest of his body looks good to me.
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Posted By: ceddo
Date Posted: 18 September 2006 at 5:10am
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The pecs should be lower and have more volume (the character looks kinda flat as it is now). Also, his thoracic cage looks like it has a strange shape. Try to accentuate the end of the thoracic cage, and add some side muscles next to the abs (they're the muscles in my opinion that make the difference between a weakling and a schwarzenegger).
Other than that, the shading is good (besides the fact that you just copied one side and flipped it over to make it symmetrical to the other) and the head is a bit too egg-shaped.. try to make it look more boxy. |
Posted By: ulbandi
Date Posted: 18 September 2006 at 12:12pm
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Anatomy study: In addition to what others pointed out, his waist/abdomen looks too thin compared to the the rest of his body.
Pyramid Head: PH's helmet looks like a 2D triangle, and it shouldn't be symmetrical like it is now. I'd try putting it at an angle so the front comes forward a bit and you can see it's a dimensional object, not a flat shape. His left arm is a little off too, but the rest looks pretty good. |