A Killing Machine
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 12 September 2025 at 11:47am
Topic: A Killing Machine
Posted By: zeid
Subject: A Killing Machine
Date Posted: 11 October 2006 at 8:30am
 A piece I've been working on lately, curious as to what people think needs work. I intend to add it to the gallery soon as I think it's close to completion, unless of course lots of Crits come up. 
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Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 11 October 2006 at 8:43am
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Something about the legs look wrong. They don't quite match the anatomical scale for the torso. Too thin and devoid of any musculature. I suspect you might get a few "feet, not grounded" type of crits. I would also revisit your lines and use some selout to soften some of the more jagged areas.
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Posted By: EyeCraft
Date Posted: 11 October 2006 at 9:23am
| Great detail! The legs are definately the biggest problem, rework them. Then the jaggies, sel-out + AA should fix it up nicely, then I think this will look very shmick =D |
Posted By: zeid
Date Posted: 11 October 2006 at 9:48am
| Thanks for the crits so far, Yer ive definately been getting a lot of complaints about the legs. I will rework those a fair bit, im not the best when it comes to selOut so that may take me a while |
Posted By: chess
Date Posted: 13 October 2006 at 12:42pm
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let the legs if they should be so
what is that for a weapon? it looks ugly sry |
Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 13 October 2006 at 5:14pm
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Originally posted by chess let the legs if they should be so what is that for a weapon? it looks ugly sry okay, wtf? Seriously. You make no sense. "let the legs if they should be so" ?? And if you think the weapon looks ugly, make a suggestion on how to change it. Zeid, I think the legs should be a bit more thicker. I like the way the fabric hangs on the body, but I would get rid of the highlight on the weapon. I'd also add a foot. Good shading! [EDIT: lezz be nicer pls :)] ------------- |
Posted By: zeid
Date Posted: 15 October 2006 at 12:21pm
Thanks for the crits so far guys and gals. This latest update hasnt attended to the legs yet im afraid and still needs a fair bit but I've been really busy actually im finishing off a 3000 word essay right now sorry. |