A couple WIPs, please help
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Printed Date: 12 September 2025 at 6:48am
Topic: A couple WIPs, please help
Posted By: skeddles
Subject: A couple WIPs, please help
Date Posted: 27 November 2006 at 4:33pm
1. here is myself as an RPG character, thats for a school project. This is my first try, so please give me tons of c+c and help.
2. just a line art of a lighthouse, gonna add windows to the top.
3.Purple bunny. second is probobly better. is there any way i can improve?
please dont look and leave, COMMENT!
*may add more*
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Posted By: patsfan708
Date Posted: 30 November 2006 at 9:11am
| they're better than my rock |
Posted By: JerryPie
Date Posted: 30 November 2006 at 12:11pm
| The rabbits colors merge to much..Try and do it with 4 colors instead of 5 since the picture is so small. It isnt to bad..maybe add a body and it will look cooler. |
Posted By: skeddles
Date Posted: 30 November 2006 at 12:55pm
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the 1st rabbit or the second ?the second i tried to contrast them more. |
Posted By: Larwick
Date Posted: 30 November 2006 at 2:45pm
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I dissagree with Flyguy, i think the colours you picked all have their place in the picture. The second one is definetely an improvement on the first in my eyes, but could be seen as being a bit dark (the white background doesn't help). Perhaps have a go at some different palettes to see which you like best. Be brave!
As for the lineart, i like it, although the ears look a bit odd, especially the upright one, which has a large blob at the end.. :) -------------  http://larw-ck.deviantart.com">
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Posted By: skeddles
Date Posted: 30 November 2006 at 3:48pm
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@larwick, i knoticed that too lol
what do you guys think of the sprite?
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Posted By: thesalus
Date Posted: 30 November 2006 at 5:40pm
| Your sprite kind of looks like a little rag doll (probably the feet most of all that make it seem so - they look like they are dangling, rather than on solid ground). It also looks like it is wearing a corset [as in the waist seems too thin]. His clothes also seem to be suffering from a bit of pillow shading. |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 30 November 2006 at 11:34pm
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1- rpg, is cute but the indent on the waist is wierd looking 2- lighthouse? looks more like a ... 3- 2nd bunny better Originally posted by patsfan708 they're better than my rock Sense of humor and a 'pats' fan. Will you marry me?  ------------- |
Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 01 December 2006 at 2:21am
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Originally posted by jalonso 2- lighthouse? looks more like a ... bullet. ------------- |
Posted By: skeddles
Date Posted: 01 December 2006 at 5:01pm
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ok firstly: and heres my update:
 better?als which feet?also:i am trying to make a cliffish thing. sorta like this http://www.pixeljoint.com/files/icons/full/moon_lit_2.png - http://www.pixeljoint.com/files/icons/full/moon_lit_2.png
but a frontal veiw. i tried sketching it(on paint, but it didnt come out oo good)any one else wanna give it a try? |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 01 December 2006 at 8:39pm
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Feet on the right look better. Try this if you wish for a more proportionate character, if not ignore ;) Feet thinner by 1 pixel - 2 pixels high instead of 3 Pants longer by 2 pixels - at the knees and delete those 2 white pixels (boys don't have thin waists like that) Shorten shirt by 1 pixel - at the waist Lenghten the arms by 3 pixels - at the elbow ------------- |
Posted By: skeddles
Date Posted: 02 December 2006 at 6:56pm
 im working on the rabbit pallette...either of these appeal to you? now does this look better? |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 02 December 2006 at 7:41pm
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looks much more betterer than what you had cept maybe the shoes you had before looked cuter/betterst bunnie completorated finish the condom lookin one, XD ------------- |
Posted By: skeddles
Date Posted: 02 December 2006 at 7:44pm
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ITS A FREAKIN LIGHTHOUSE! lolXD and which bunnie pallette do i use? |
Posted By: skeddles
Date Posted: 03 December 2006 at 2:02pm
| i want the sprite to look as good as if a pro did it, what else can i do? |
Posted By: skeddles
Date Posted: 05 December 2006 at 8:34am
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bump
twas almost on page 2
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Posted By: skeddles
Date Posted: 08 December 2006 at 2:54pm
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are you really gonna make me post 4 times? lets not make it 5. just answer me. |
Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 08 December 2006 at 3:45pm
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Generally we respond better to updates than bumps. Bumps tend to annoy most people, actually. And if you must bump, do it more than 1-3 days after the last post. ------------- http://pixelmonkey.ensellitis.com"> 
RPG is numberwang. |
Posted By: skeddles
Date Posted: 08 December 2006 at 3:47pm
| everytime it had gotton to page 2. and my question remeain unanswered. |
Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 08 December 2006 at 4:43pm
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I suggest you lighten the dark parts of the brown bunny and use that. Also, it's better to let a single topic die than to let others' respect for you suffer that fate. At least try to bump with updates on other parts in the future. ------------- http://pixelmonkey.ensellitis.com">
RPG is numberwang. |