!!!!!~~~EVIL CARNIVAL~~~!!!!!
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
URL: https://pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=3428
Printed Date: 10 September 2025 at 3:24am
Topic: !!!!!~~~EVIL CARNIVAL~~~!!!!!
Posted By: JerryPie
Subject: !!!!!~~~EVIL CARNIVAL~~~!!!!!
Date Posted: 29 November 2006 at 6:17pm
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Hey guys! Tell me what you think! http://www.freewebs.com/flyzzz/evilcarnival5.png - http://www.freewebs.com/flyzzz/evilcarnival5.png
 Would an admin please insert this image to my post? I cant do it, when I click the image button my internet explorer shuts down. Its bugged for me I must have a virus. Thanks alot :) EDIT by jalonso: OK, but do what Aleiav said below next time, k, k. Crit me good guys !!!
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Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 29 November 2006 at 9:00pm
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you can do it yourself by using the image BB code: [*IMG]http://imagelink.com/image.gif[/IMG*] without the * ------------- |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 29 November 2006 at 9:46pm
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Looks like you worked hard on this. I only find the lightsource (and lack of) is all over the place. The pixel on the whole is interesting.
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Posted By: JerryPie
Date Posted: 29 November 2006 at 10:15pm
| thanks :p |
Posted By: Dra_chan
Date Posted: 29 November 2006 at 11:21pm
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This piece is going in the right direction. As jalonso said, add a
lightsource to give the piece more depht. That clown is scary ;_;
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Posted By: Toonses
Date Posted: 29 November 2006 at 11:36pm
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haha, I love the expression on both their faces. Excellent work, just needs a little tweaking, as the others ahve said, and I think it's ready for submission :D ------------- "I'm not that kind of orc!" -- random disgruntled peon |
Posted By: JerryPie
Date Posted: 30 November 2006 at 5:39am
| Thanks guys... Would anyone mind helping me create a good pallete for the guy in teh foreground? I cant seem to make his flesh look like its matching its sarroundings.. I can adjust lighting after I find the right color scheme. If you cant, thanks for viewing. :) |
Posted By: EyeCraft
Date Posted: 30 November 2006 at 7:03am
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Well well, this is quite alot of work! The front guy's face is way too bright for such a dim scene, its really standing out and distracting. Reduce the values of all the colours for his face. With the shading of the wood, on the fence specifically, you are adding highlight tones from panel to panel, but not removing/cutting down on shadow tones as you do so, which simply makes the texture of the wood "deeper" in appearance, rather than convincingly increasing the brightness of the plank. The white wood panel that is broken by the window the clown is leering through is another place this is happening. Basically im saying you have a transition of highlight throughout the image, but no transition of shadow, and this is washing out the depth. And the rooves (sp?) have no shadow or depth at all, so yeah a global lightsouce really needs to be worked into it. The mountains in the background could use more work, too, define their form in terms of a lightsource and shade accordingly. |