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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
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Printed Date: 14 September 2025 at 2:32am


Topic: Delete This Post!
Posted By: Burak
Subject: Delete This Post!
Date Posted: 15 December 2006 at 11:20am
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Posted By: Krysis
Date Posted: 15 December 2006 at 11:42am

Ehem... arms, neck, torso and erm... brows are too thick. And the shoulders are too wide.

I don't like the heads. Seem too big. You use way too many colours.


Posted By: Burak
Date Posted: 15 December 2006 at 11:45am
its for a game, the girl version is ultimatly crap im asking for peoples help.

its for the warrior class for my game.


Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 15 December 2006 at 3:05pm
You should try to google some reference pictures of muscular women for an idea of what type of shape they should be.

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Posted By: leel
Date Posted: 15 December 2006 at 5:34pm

1. this isn't pixelart - don't use blur tool, or put npa in title.  IMO, this wood look better as pure pixelart, right now it looks way too messy for the size.

2. Men and women have VERY different body types, you can't just put a bra on a man and call it a woman.  You need to do a lot of research and check out others' sprites or google references.  Also it'd seem you need a lot more practice with just traditional drawing to understand the basic human shape


Posted By: Burak
Date Posted: 16 December 2006 at 8:47am
Hey guys its me again,

This is my character for my game. its the side view...

can someone help me make this betteR?

I couldnt do the head,nose,mouth,foot and underwear :S please help me.



Posted By: Larwick
Date Posted: 16 December 2006 at 8:54am
Originally posted by Burak

its for a game, the girl version is ultimatly crap im asking for peoples help.

its for the warrior class for my game.
 
Burak, you have to understand that Krysis was trying to help you with his critisisms. Even if he wasn't very specific, it still should pose helpful in improving your pieces. Don't ignore it next time.
 
Leel is wise.


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Posted By: Larwick
Date Posted: 16 December 2006 at 11:19am
I just moved your other thread post to here.

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