Bear...
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 11 September 2025 at 3:56am
Topic: Bear...
Posted By: ..::Naso::..
Subject: Bear...
Date Posted: 22 June 2005 at 10:03pm
Well this isent really a [WIP] but i want to see if i can get some C&c on it to make it kooler ^^ |
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Posted By: Saboteur
Date Posted: 23 June 2005 at 12:10am
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The eyes look a little out of place. You've got gentle dithering all along the head, then an abrupt solid line surrounding the eyes. Try give the guy some hints at eyesockets. And I feel like it needs more detail. Maybe try for some more fur-like texturing on the body and face. ------------- "I was minding my own business and walking across a pebbled path, and a Duck started giving me the business." |
Posted By: DragonSoar
Date Posted: 23 June 2005 at 12:20pm
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I feel I've seen this bear before somewhere before... hmmm. As Saboteur said there some AAing is needed on the abrupt lines, but also I suggest some selout as well. |
Posted By: ..::Naso::..
Date Posted: 23 June 2005 at 3:59pm
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Kool thanks, but were are the "abrupt lines" so i can fix them and DragonSoar, what is "Selout" ?
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Posted By: Saboteur
Date Posted: 23 June 2005 at 5:31pm
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The abrupt lines are the outlines around the eyes. ------------- "I was minding my own business and walking across a pebbled path, and a Duck started giving me the business." |
Posted By: ..::Naso::..
Date Posted: 23 June 2005 at 6:49pm
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What do you want me to do with the lines around the eyes? AA them?
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Posted By: Saboteur
Date Posted: 23 June 2005 at 7:47pm
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I was thinking more along the lines of showing indent in the face where eyes should be... or something. I'm not exactly sure, it just looks wrong. ------------- "I was minding my own business and walking across a pebbled path, and a Duck started giving me the business." |
Posted By: DragonSoar
Date Posted: 24 June 2005 at 12:45pm
| Selout = Selective outlining, not having outlines in one dark colour. |
Posted By: Jamie
Date Posted: 24 June 2005 at 12:54pm
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Originally posted by DragonSoar
<FONT face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size=2>I feel I've seen this bear before somewhere before... hmmm. As Saboteur said there some AAing is needed on the abrupt lines, but also I suggest some selout as well. I belive this is newton the bear, so obious 
if its traced i dont know, but this is surely newton next time i suggest you post refrences |