300 mockups
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Category: Pixel Art
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Printed Date: 11 September 2025 at 5:32pm
Topic: 300 mockups
Posted By: PixelSnader
Subject: 300 mockups
Date Posted: 05 April 2007 at 1:04pm
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no, not 300 mockups, you silly person. mockups of 300 =P for my portfolio i wanna do some mockups, and i wanted to start with a 300 fighting, DS game old versions:
http://imagehost.ensellitis.com/imagesv2/5397386374DSmenu.PNG - http://imagehost.ensellitis.com/imagesv2/5397386374DSmenu.PNG
crush me with critique
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Posted By: AdrianJensen
Date Posted: 05 April 2007 at 3:01pm
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loveing it.
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Posted By: Serendor
Date Posted: 05 April 2007 at 3:27pm
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If thats king lionydos ( spelling?) I think he need more beard and his always calm..... this one seems furios.. very nice though.. maybe showing the spartan sign on the shield would be nice.... I can't argue the pixeling... but thats what I want to see more of :D *** EDIT *** Maybe some more background soldiers... just small tiny black figures in the sunset.... //Albin ------------- www.sunbladez.com |
Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 05 April 2007 at 9:08pm
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The hand that holds the sword need a bit of work to be credible.
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Posted By: PixelSnader
Date Posted: 06 April 2007 at 4:41am
game over screen. i like this one a lot more, and i think im going to redo the main menu pretty much completely, to make it fit this
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Posted By: Dragen
Date Posted: 06 April 2007 at 11:36am
| I love it, you're doing this for a 300 game for DS? |
Posted By: PixelSnader
Date Posted: 06 April 2007 at 11:57am
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some mockups of a game yes, not an actual game...- |
Posted By: Dragen
Date Posted: 06 April 2007 at 12:05pm
| ah, I see. I heard a 300 game is already out, but it is in japanese. My friend has a ROM for it. |
Posted By: M.E.
Date Posted: 06 April 2007 at 1:57pm
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Hi Snader, Hope I can give you some advice on your pieces. They look very good. What I find strange is the lighting of the first piece. There appears to be light coming from multiple directions. Maybe there is a fire on the right of the character, but then the body color should have more of a red-glare. It could also be that there is a mirror in the armor that he is holding, but it isn´t that common to be there  The body looks ok to me, the muscles in the stomach should be down a bit and they shouldn´t be pointing out like you have. I think his nose should be a bit longer and currently it looks like he has something in his mouth. Maybe you can make a gesture with his mouth instead of the current pose? The hand looks a bit odd as well and I have attempted an edit:  You made some highlight on the iron at his wrest, but then there would be one or two highlights on the bottom of the arm as well. When you hold something that is not that big, the thumb usualy is a little down under the first finger. The edit would still need work, but hopefully I made it just a little better? The second piece is my favorite too. Except for the hand-action of the attacker. That looks weird. Almost if he is killing himself. I'm not even sure about what hit is that he is holding!? Hopefully you can use one or two of my advices. Best regards from M.E. ------------- http://www.kunststukken.nl - KunstStukken.nl M.E. Art |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 07 April 2007 at 6:27am
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oh, the second 'look' is way better than the first scrappy ones. The colors are good but could be improved slightly to a more amber hued environment without being yellow.
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Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 07 April 2007 at 11:51pm
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AWESOME movie. :) looking good so far. ------------- |