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Ehm, help a noob xD

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Topic: Ehm, help a noob xD
Posted By: Hawker
Subject: Ehm, help a noob xD
Date Posted: 27 June 2005 at 7:21pm

Yeah, im a noob xD... but i want to get better in pixel art... and i ihave problems with big sprites.. here are 3 of my best works.. so i need comments for get better :D...

 




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Posted By: spymp3
Date Posted: 28 June 2005 at 2:36am
Hi,I think the collours are good but you need more shading!

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Posted By: sedgemonkey
Date Posted: 28 June 2005 at 8:02am

Nice use of color to shade the face of the first piece. Getting those subtle tones down is a challenge.

The second piece looks very ackward... are we looking at the back of a person?

Your third piece has good shading and colors, but a little confusing with the shape.



Posted By: Bear
Date Posted: 28 June 2005 at 8:28am
hello SH glad you clicked the link at our forum to this place! :D

i think sedgemonkey handled the crits so

hi n_n


Posted By: Hawker
Date Posted: 28 June 2005 at 10:15am

hiho, xD, and thanks for the comments :D... they are very usefull :D

and yeah you are looking at the back of a person



Posted By: Citizen_Insane
Date Posted: 28 June 2005 at 11:28am

yeah, great use of colours there..

the composition on the second piece could be a bit better, though,
because like sledge monkey said it's kind of confusing... but I see
it now, now that you guys pointed out that it's his back.

In my opinion, a nice strong V shape makes the back
view more recognizable... You know, lats.

looking good, though.



Posted By: Rifts
Date Posted: 28 June 2005 at 2:23pm
heres anotha 1 of my mini tut thingys lol.... useing ur peice as an
example...
it looks to me like you have done the anti aniliseing back 2 front.....
as u can see from these too imgaes the first is your original the
seccond my edit of the antianiliseing done properly, you cant notice
much differnce...


it doesnt look like they are much differnt at all, but look what
yhappens when we give it lets say a black bg... (the 1st is your
original the secoond my edit)




see the differnce in qualaty? study your version and my version to
see how its done, an thats usefull 2 alla yall


Posted By: Dixet
Date Posted: 29 June 2005 at 3:10am
Originally posted by Hawker

Yeah, im a noob xD... but i want to get better in pixel art... and i ihave problems with big sprites.. here are 3 of my best works.. so i need comments for get better :D...

 



Nice to see ya arround here, Shadow Hylian.  You're imrpoving a lot, I personally love that third one.


Posted By: Hawker
Date Posted: 29 June 2005 at 4:33am
omg, is dixet! xD... thanks :)... nice to see you 2



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