sprites
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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 14 September 2025 at 2:32am
Topic: sprites
Posted By: Setzer
Subject: sprites
Date Posted: 13 April 2007 at 1:03pm
http://sj-gfx.com/b/sixy.png - concept art I drew up
quickly while watching wayne's world II at 4am . The game idea
is actually a rather old one I had, (some of the very old sprites in my
gallery were for it) - >  ->  there are alot of things wrong with it, so I figured I'd post it here for c+c ------------- http://sj-gfx.com"> 
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Posted By: M.E.
Date Posted: 15 April 2007 at 11:13pm
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Hello Setzer, Just learning a lot myself so I'm maybe not the one you want listening too, but since I do have some opinions on it I rather share so it may help you with the sprite. Firstly I realy like the sneekers!! What bothers me is that the gun is a black thing with no shadow/highlight on it. His hair looks a bit strange. Maybe use a different color? What is it that he is wearing around his chest? Is that a halter? If so, it sticks out strangely and usually the halter is around his armpit. The stretched out hand with the gun seems a bit odd as well my guess is that the elbow needs to shift, or to rise the whole arm a pixel or two. Hopefully you value my response and maybe one or two advices will help you a bit. Best regards from M.E. ------------- http://www.kunststukken.nl - KunstStukken.nl M.E. Art |
Posted By: alkaline
Date Posted: 16 April 2007 at 10:00am
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his head is too far forward. i agree with the gun and hair. his arm is too short as well. |
Posted By: Setzer
Date Posted: 18 April 2007 at 12:58am
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hair = not hair, I was going for those pilot goggle-helmet things (the goggles do nothing) I hadn't done much on the gun because I didn't know where I was going with it the helmet is now purple to set it apart, I don't know what color I want it update ------------- http://sj-gfx.com">
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Posted By: PixelSnader
Date Posted: 18 April 2007 at 2:48am
| might i suggest brown leather? the goggles could use some more contrast to show they are goggles i think |