noyamano ringo from air gear anime
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Topic: noyamano ringo from air gear anime
Posted By: computeruser28
Subject: noyamano ringo from air gear anime
Date Posted: 21 May 2007 at 1:02pm
http://www.animestocks.com/gallery_files/images/Air%20Gear/Ringo%20Noyamano/ringo_017_animestocks%5Bcom%5D.jpg - reference  C&C please... I'm getting pretty tired of cutting renders for signatures, so I tried pixelling one stock I found in the Internet. Now I'm just using two colors, but if you think they're not good for the image then tell me so I can change it. edit:  Which one is better? The one on the left almost copies the ref image on the coloring and the right side only uses two colors. Needs more contrast or something? I'm not sure... ------------- 
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Posted By: leel
Date Posted: 21 May 2007 at 7:52pm
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I can't really tell whats going on with her legs... o.0
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Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 22 May 2007 at 9:13am
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I think the lineart is sketchy and confusing, so a lot of the problems you're going to have with this piece will stem from that. Maybe clearing it up so we can tell what exactly it is when we look at it rather than guessing.
I know it's a girl jumping or something... but it's not clear enough to get immediately, IMHO. ------------- |
Posted By: computeruser28
Date Posted: 22 May 2007 at 10:15am
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When I look at the reference pic for the first time, I can tell what was it... Well yeah it is a girl jumping... I'll redo the legs again. Is the ref image clear enough to not be confused?
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Posted By: leel
Date Posted: 22 May 2007 at 11:51am
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to be honest I didnt look at the ref last time (didnt notice it) but, I'd suggest you turn the foot the other way, it'll be more readable then imo ------------- |
Posted By: computeruser28
Date Posted: 22 May 2007 at 12:09pm
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I think I'll change it while I'm editting the lineart. The foot seems to be pointing to the right too much now...
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Posted By: Noburo
Date Posted: 23 May 2007 at 10:07am
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Don't forget to add the other skate so we know exactly where the second foot is, it will make it a lot easier to tell what pose she is in. Even if it is just a little bit then cut off like the your reference. |
Posted By: computeruser28
Date Posted: 23 May 2007 at 10:34am
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I can't really think how to position her second foot... I'm not sure how I'd show it... I'll try.
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Posted By: PixelSnader
Date Posted: 23 May 2007 at 12:24pm
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the legs and torso should be way longer ------------- ▄▄█ ▄▄█ ▄█▄ ▄█▄ |