rework ness
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Topic: rework ness
Posted By: Bear
Subject: rework ness
Date Posted: 02 July 2005 at 3:35pm
reworked a old piece of mine to see how much i've improved over the few
months i've been pixeling  new old |
Replies:
Posted By: ..::Naso::..
Date Posted: 02 July 2005 at 4:08pm
I like that new style yo have there but it looks weaird with that straw in his mouth, other then that its fine
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Posted By: Claudster
Date Posted: 02 July 2005 at 5:05pm
You have improved so much!  I agree with the straw thing though, in a way it looks like is attached to his nose. Make it a different colour maybe?
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Posted By: Bear
Date Posted: 02 July 2005 at 5:16pm
| yah i need to fix that |
Posted By: leel
Date Posted: 02 July 2005 at 6:18pm
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some eye balls would be nice...
great improvement! I like the mouth, but now that Claudster mentioned it, it does look like the straw is attached to the nose |
Posted By: Bear
Date Posted: 02 July 2005 at 6:42pm
| ^_^ srry but no eyeballs is ma style |
Posted By: Saboteur
Date Posted: 02 July 2005 at 11:42pm
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Uhh, you were fricking stellar to begin with! How dare you improve! -sulks because of his relatively inadequate pixelling skills- ------------- "I was minding my own business and walking across a pebbled path, and a Duck started giving me the business." |
Posted By: 1ucas
Date Posted: 02 July 2005 at 11:57pm
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Yeaaah, you improved a lot. I'd suggest you to change the angle of the straw, not remove it.
Hue shifts are fun, aren't they? 
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Posted By: Lawrence
Date Posted: 03 July 2005 at 4:04am
| The colours used for the shading is definitely much better, that's a great improvement. |
Posted By: Rynov
Date Posted: 04 July 2005 at 10:10am
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Pretty neat style there, I still like the neck area better on the old one though. Other than that, much improvement, great work! ------------- Shine my shoes, infidel! http://www.kamikazerocket.deviantart.com - http://www.kamikazerocket.deviantart.com |
Posted By: Rifts
Date Posted: 04 July 2005 at 10:47am
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r u kidding the straw is great ts 2 of my fav styles hes useing and the
no eyeballs is gr8 2 KEEP IT!! |
Posted By: PixelSnader
Date Posted: 04 July 2005 at 11:37am
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some of you may want to hit me for this, but i prefer the original piece (well exept the 2 dots in his eyebrows) even though you have improved your techniques, i think you should pay some more attention to some things. right now you have (in my opinion) sacrificed character for ''looks'' allso i dont like the lots of blue is nice.. hue shifts are good. practically essential even, but i think you overdone it on the skin you allso pay more attention to your line execution, instead of the visual effect of it. look at the nose's curve. it used to be a nice curve, slightly aa-ed. but now its just a compilation of many different colours, and it hast lost its shape because of that plus you made the eyes skincolour. thats a =( for me. white was much more expressive ------------- ▄▄█ ▄▄█ ▄█▄ ▄█▄ |
Posted By: Rifts
Date Posted: 04 July 2005 at 2:09pm
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to me its got an alltogether differnt charicter to it instead of chearfull
smileing guy and i think it works better but i supose thgats just opinion |