(WIP) SPRITES 4 MMORPG, CC :)
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Printed Date: 11 September 2025 at 2:20am
Topic: (WIP) SPRITES 4 MMORPG, CC :)
Posted By: Burak
Subject: (WIP) SPRITES 4 MMORPG, CC :)
Date Posted: 09 June 2007 at 10:51am
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ok guys, ive started making sprites for my mmorpg, theres something wrong i just cant put my finger on it :S, C+C please :) 
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Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 09 June 2007 at 11:19am
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no heads :p
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Posted By: Burak
Date Posted: 09 June 2007 at 11:20am
| lol does the body look done so i can begin the head lol. |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 09 June 2007 at 11:24am
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hehe, These are the details I see could use some fixing: In the walking away mode the feet just thin out. Because the toes are so rounded in the other views this version will look odd in animation. Use the walking forward outline and then bring the heel down. In the side view the legs are not the smoothest (maybe the clothing will fix that :/ In the rear view the base has no butt which looks just like the front. Maybe make the blue undies more butt-ish. ------------- |
Posted By: dragonrc
Date Posted: 09 June 2007 at 11:27am
| why is the body pointing left and right randomly in the side view? |
Posted By: Burak
Date Posted: 09 June 2007 at 11:36am
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lol because i got confused, its a 8 frame walk, and 4 are flipped on side it got mixed and 5 are made and 3 are flipped :S thanks for the info, i will work on what you said :) |
Posted By: theguy
Date Posted: 09 June 2007 at 12:32pm
transparent-afied
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Posted By: Di0xygen
Date Posted: 09 June 2007 at 12:55pm
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@theguy, whats the use of making it transparent, I really dont see the point of that edit. It's a sprite sheet, theres no need to have it transparent. I think the big problem i see is that he looks like a 3 years old boy, he has no shoulder, he has gigantic feets, and very small arms. Maybe givning it a more mature shape would help a lot. ------------- c==3 |
Posted By: Burak
Date Posted: 09 June 2007 at 12:57pm
Ok heres a update, some updates, fixed feet with help from a friend: Adlin, and underwear, introduced a but :) hehehe.
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Posted By: Babunar
Date Posted: 11 June 2007 at 11:16am
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The feet on the bottom row are still HUGE.... Also, make the shoulders a bit squarer. I like it though, it has potential. ------------- Don't take life so seriously. You're not going to get out of it alive. |
Posted By: Serendor
Date Posted: 11 June 2007 at 3:29pm
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Think it would be nice to show a head attached to the body much easier to help you then I think... //Albin ------------- www.sunbladez.com |
Posted By: Babunar
Date Posted: 12 June 2007 at 1:57am
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You've still got a left-facer in the rightmost box of the bottom row... Flip it quick! :P
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Posted By: leel
Date Posted: 12 June 2007 at 4:56pm
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im sorry i dont have time to read the whole thing so maybe this was already adressed, but.. why aren't the knees bent.. like.. ever?
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