Bowser Type Thing
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Topic: Bowser Type Thing
Posted By: SoulChild
Subject: Bowser Type Thing
Date Posted: 02 July 2007 at 11:08am
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C+C Please
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Posted By: Omegavolt
Date Posted: 02 July 2007 at 11:29am
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The highlights are a little weird. They should conform to the shape of the object they are highlighting, not just be splotches of brightness. This is most evident on the snout and foot.
The point of the highlight 'teardrop' on the snout should actually expand as the snout grows larger toward the front, not shrink into nothing. As for the highlight on the foot, it looks like you just tossed a circle of brightness in there. It will need to conform to the foot and claws more.
Also, you should get rid of the black outline and try a selout outline instead.
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