WIP - Ellicia
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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Topic: WIP - Ellicia
Posted By: Tadashi Blossom
Subject: WIP - Ellicia
Date Posted: 22 July 2007 at 12:11am
Alright, this needs revision before gallery will accept it; I've never
done this before (posted a WIP for crits, that is), so let's WIP this thing and see what we get for
results... Thanks, y'all :) |
Replies:
Posted By: PC3200
Date Posted: 22 July 2007 at 1:02am
| The left shoulder is too big and the right hand is smaller than the other, that's all I see. |
Posted By: M.E.
Date Posted: 22 July 2007 at 2:10am
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Hello Tadashi Blossom, The shoulder-line appears to go from left up to right down, but the breasts and the rest down have a frontal view. I think you aim for a side view so my advice would be to make a diagonal of the breasts making the left one (her right) smaller and more upwards. The shadow/shade on the left should be made smaller so that her body 'faces' the correct way. Maybe you should also look at her dress being kind of stiff. ( = Like a carton box) Good luck with it! Best regards from M.E. ------------- http://www.kunststukken.nl - KunstStukken.nl M.E. Art |