Little Cloth Man
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 14 September 2025 at 2:15am
Topic: Little Cloth Man
Posted By: sweytie_piy
Subject: Little Cloth Man
Date Posted: 26 July 2007 at 10:53pm
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Hi!
Well, this is my second attempt at pixel art, and I thought I might try to try out my dithering skills (or lack thereof). This little guy is meant to be made out of material or something. He's going to be holding a light of some sort, and as well as that light source, I think I'm going to have a softer light source coming from the same direction.
I realise he is headless at the moment... but that's because I can't get the shape right
 C&C is much appreciated!
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Posted By: M.E.
Date Posted: 26 July 2007 at 11:15pm
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Hello Swytie_piy, Nice contrasting colors. The figure reminds me of piglet from Pooh. First of all I suggest you check out the outline. Apart from the feet that really don't hold that much structure they are also not in line with the rest of the body. Also the hand/arm can have more weight to it as it is kind of a thick line at the moment. You might consider bending the tip of the arm (just like a hand) around the stick. And while you at it, please fix the tip so that the stick is not showing through  It is best to do the line art of everything = also the head before doing shading/coloring etc. Because everything relates to eachother. The shadow of the head will also effect the body etc... Looking forward to see the head ! Best regards from M.E. ------------- http://www.kunststukken.nl - KunstStukken.nl M.E. Art |