Cheese Logo
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 12 September 2025 at 9:08am
Topic: Cheese Logo
Posted By: InfernoMan.EXE
Subject: Cheese Logo
Date Posted: 29 August 2007 at 1:24pm
Now: When I started:  Comments? C+C? Edits are mucho appreciated! |
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Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 29 August 2007 at 1:33pm
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It looks very nice and clean! But if you want suggestions from me: You could try to highlight some lines, maybe thats better, maybe its not... for the open hole, I would not use thick lines again, it looks weird, and for the largest hole I would change the shading a bit.. doesnt look very realistic now.. and some AA on the middle line :) But it looks great! Really! ------------- |
Posted By: thesalus
Date Posted: 29 August 2007 at 2:59pm
I hope you don't mind, but I made a little edit of two of the holes on your cheese wedge. One thing I didn't like is that your air pockets didn't suggest spherical bubbles (which I'm assuming is the case in reality - I'm no cheesemaster). I tried to make them seem more spherical in my edit. The other is the anti-aliasing that you currently have in place doesn't smooth out the lines very well. But otherwise... lots of AA will help make it smooth.  |
Posted By: InfernoMan.EXE
Date Posted: 29 August 2007 at 6:28pm
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Thank you a lot! I will get working on the next update.. And yes.. The holes are there from air bubbles. They form in the cheese when it is made.. anyways... EDIT: Any more comments until I move on to my small cheese icon thingies? |
Posted By: BlackEye
Date Posted: 31 August 2007 at 8:12am
| the bubbles are formed by fart gas from bacterias |
Posted By: spartan_117
Date Posted: 31 August 2007 at 11:52am
thank you for that enlightening biological explanation.
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