machinery "Fly Accelerator" ...
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Topic: machinery "Fly Accelerator" ...
Posted By: zi-double
Subject: machinery "Fly Accelerator" ...
Date Posted: 12 July 2005 at 12:30am
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I want to make some machinery for "mech scene" ... Name is - "fly accelerator" because haven't arms ... I want to be as motorcycle with one pilot and one traveller as in Star Wars :)
I think red light are best choice, but I'm not sure ! 32 colours and non animated for now ...
====================== :) GDGB :) |
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Posted By: Monstara
Date Posted: 12 July 2005 at 12:33am
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wow this is cool. only thing that bothers me is the stance of the front guy - his bottom should be farther back on the seat. yes, red lights look best IMO. |
Posted By: Ensellitis
Date Posted: 12 July 2005 at 12:35am
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Red lights are the best choice, but if you are gonna animate it, you should make them blink from red to green, IMO. Great work so far! ------------- There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross. |
Posted By: zi-double
Date Posted: 12 July 2005 at 1:26am
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Thanks Monstara I repair pilot :) ... and I think too for Red lights Ensellitis ... thanks :)
====================== :) GDGB :) |
Posted By: sedgemonkey
Date Posted: 12 July 2005 at 8:21am
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This is a cool start zi... the only thing that looks off to me is the flame coming from the back of the vehicle. I'm sure once you start animating the flame will look better but right now it looks odd. |
Posted By: zi-double
Date Posted: 13 July 2005 at 11:30pm
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thanks sedge ...
just one new /I can't say/ machine from last 2 days :) for name maybe "air-strip" :)
In front part need more work ... ====================== :) GDGB :)
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Posted By: Ensellitis
Date Posted: 14 July 2005 at 12:34am
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Wow, it's looking great... I can't really see anything to add, maybe some kind of dritness?
------------- There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross. |
Posted By: ryan-gfx
Date Posted: 14 July 2005 at 1:01am
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Zi, these are encredibly well done, like something out of metal slug :) You are getting better and better, bud |
Posted By: zi-double
Date Posted: 14 July 2005 at 4:33am
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I see some mistakes and edit "air-strip" Ensellitis Thanks ryan always glad to read your comments ... and I just try to be better ====================== :) GDGB :) |
Posted By: Ensellitis
Date Posted: 14 July 2005 at 4:55am
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Are you gonna make some kind of game out of these?
------------- There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross. |
Posted By: Xero
Date Posted: 14 July 2005 at 6:53am
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Originally posted by ryan-gfx
Zi, these are encredibly well done, like something out of metal slug :) You are getting better and better, bud Agreed completely ryan, your work is getting even better zi, good work :) But I always try to find something to crit, no matter how small so... 2 things, the first, on the back of the fly accellerator, there flames coming out of a 'hole', it doesnt look like a hole because the lighting is placed on the upper part, making it look more like a tiny sphere.. just a tiny crit but still. And the landing thing, on the back triangular things, theres shine on the forwards side of the front most one, but not on the forwards side of the back one? Again a small crit, but I hope it helps! Just goes to show your gettin so good its hard to crit you :P |
Posted By: Core_12
Date Posted: 14 July 2005 at 1:17pm
Nice style. The design of the air-strip is pretty bizarre 
------------- Reality is for people who lack imagination |
Posted By: zi-double
Date Posted: 16 July 2005 at 4:48am
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No Ensellitis I make them for my pleasure as always Xero thanks for very usefull and detailed comment ... I repair my mistakes and this crit isn't "tiny" Bizarre like in "Return of the Jedy" Core_12 ... nothing commontly just like idea ... here is opponent part ... She is one split part from mech ...
====================== :) GDGB :) |
Posted By: ..::Naso::..
Date Posted: 16 July 2005 at 9:19am
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Dam Zi-double, you are real good at this!!!!!!! =D This would be so kool if u make it into a game or a animated scen or something =P Nice Job  |
Posted By: sedgemonkey
Date Posted: 16 July 2005 at 12:32pm
That's a superb piece, but the flames in the back kind of imply that it's moving not bouncing in place. 
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Posted By: kiwidesign
Date Posted: 16 July 2005 at 5:01pm
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Originally posted by sedgemonkey
That's a superb piece, but the flames in the back kind of imply that it's moving not bouncing in place. yep ------------- "She doesn't quite chop his head off. She makes a Pez dispenser out of him" 
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