WIP, s'pose. o_o
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
URL: https://pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=5118
Printed Date: 12 September 2025 at 11:32am
Topic: WIP, s'pose. o_o
Posted By: Sovereign
Subject: WIP, s'pose. o_o
Date Posted: 03 October 2007 at 8:03pm
 You see, I used to pixel. Used to, mind you. So I've practically forgotten every bleeding thing I've ever known about it.
I think. Well, here, rip this to shreds. ~_o Just don't say the girl's ugly because that's me, mates. Harhar.
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Posted By: Sovereign
Date Posted: 04 October 2007 at 6:44pm
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Thanks for your critique, and I tried working on a few things you told me... I think I haven't done it right. o_< |
Posted By: Sovereign
Date Posted: 05 October 2007 at 5:45pm
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Edit;; Hmm, I fixed up a few things, the sleeves, and I did a tiled floor. - Very strange, innit? A tiled floor in the outdoors. = _ = I might change the way I made the clouds.
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Posted By: leel
Date Posted: 05 October 2007 at 6:08pm
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make your font bigger please, it's very hard to read. Thanks
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Posted By: Sovereign
Date Posted: 05 October 2007 at 6:14pm
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Done and done. Sorry 'bout that. |
Posted By: Pixel_Outlaw
Date Posted: 05 October 2007 at 10:28pm
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Originally posted by Sovereign
Ok, this is a decent start. Since the figure is mostly stylistic I'm going to just give some ideas and let your personal style take over.
First you might consider adding some texture,unless you are going for a simple paper cutout look. The anatomy for the arms is too long if you are doing formal anatomy but again if this is part of your style then maybe you could add some shadow or perhaps some hint of a joint midarm. The lines of the shirt are not the same dark curves found in the other lines, you may consider revising them they seem to stand out the most. Some symmetry is missing between the arms and this may detract from the image as a whole. The clouds or mountains look decent but you may want to give them more form by adding some shadow and light. Some areas may have too much anti aliasing for some people you might consider this.
Good luck. ;) ------------- http://www.shmup-dev.com/forum/"> 
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Posted By: Sovereign
Date Posted: 05 October 2007 at 10:41pm
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I added the image to the gallery to see if I could get more advice there as well; I did change a few things. The background I found too strange, and the shovel I removed. I also removed the shirt design and added an exclamation mark. Now the background looks like wallpaper, which honestly, it's good enough for me. I oddly like the noodle arms, but I'll see if I can imply joints, and yet still like it. Thanks. |