Friday.
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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
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Printed Date: 12 September 2025 at 5:02am
Topic: Friday.
Posted By: blue
Subject: Friday.
Date Posted: 13 July 2005 at 1:53pm
I feel no shame in admitting that I'll be at Borders for a midnight magic party on Friday Night. :P Obviously a work in progress; I'm working in steps and saving layers, too, so that I can animate later...c/c appreciated, of course. This is the first time I've played with lightsourcing like this. :) Please...I want him to stay in the proportions he is. I like it. So don't tell me his legs should be longer, etc. >.< |
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Posted By: ..::Naso::..
Date Posted: 13 July 2005 at 2:16pm
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this is preety good =D every thing is good so far cant wait to see the
hair , but one C&c, its just that his right foot ( r left ) just
that i think it shold be pointing down not kinda diagnal thats all =O
hope to see the finished thing ^^
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Posted By: Saboteur
Date Posted: 13 July 2005 at 2:33pm
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-gasp!- its hairy crackpot! is there a tertiary light source? otherwise the non-lighted parts should be almost black. ------------- "I was minding my own business and walking across a pebbled path, and a Duck started giving me the business." |
Posted By: Lawrence
Date Posted: 13 July 2005 at 3:13pm
| Ooh, looks pretty nice so far, especially for a first-time light source project. For some reason, I quite like the low-contrast shadows. |
Posted By: blue
Date Posted: 13 July 2005 at 3:51pm
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Like I said, first stages; there's going to be more shading when I get to it. and I'd rather have the purplish shadows, too. I don't like too much black in a piece. So we'll call it a glowing room with very faint light from every side. XD edit: and I'm going to fix that foot, because you're quite right. >.< |
Posted By: blue
Date Posted: 13 July 2005 at 7:53pm
Here's where I'm at now. The Patronus is...hmm. I kind of like it, but
I'm not sure. I'm thinking about a background, but don't have the
energy tonight. (; |
Posted By: So-lou
Date Posted: 13 July 2005 at 10:25pm
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This looks so great, blue - you have come so far skill-wise. I think it would benefit a lot more to have his right side (to us, his left) a bit darker to contrast with the brightness on his left. Use some of the colours in his hair pallette a tad on his pants and vest and arm. It's looking great - AND got me excited for the sixth book. XD
------------- -So-lou |
Posted By: 1ucas
Date Posted: 13 July 2005 at 10:33pm
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All the colors in the pallete are converging to a very similar gray-blue tone. This is kinda bad because the different colors won't be very useful as they won't look much different from eachother.
I suggest you to keep the hue shift to blue, but cut the number of colors to a third or a half of what you got now and make the darkest shades darker. Keep working! I'd also suggest adding a dark background, because it'll give it a lot of dark-room ambience. ------------- http://toxicdump.org/labs/frameviewer/viewer.php - Online Animated GIF Frame Viewer |
Posted By: Dutrho
Date Posted: 13 July 2005 at 10:46pm
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I like it just for the fact that its creeping me out! good job! ------------- Mmmm.. Thats good placebo! |
Posted By: sedgemonkey
Date Posted: 13 July 2005 at 11:59pm
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Borders is the place to be eh? Excellent dithering on the second go... the highlight coming from the wand looks great. |
Posted By: kankki
Date Posted: 14 July 2005 at 1:29am
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Looks like Harry Potter, I like the dithering.
------------- Well, duuuh, I can eat spam if I have to! 
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Posted By: blue
Date Posted: 14 July 2005 at 6:16am
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Originally posted by 1ucas All the colors in the pallete are converging to a very similar gray-blue tone. This is kinda bad because the different colors won't be very useful as they won't look much different from eachother. I suggest you to keep the hue shift to blue, but cut the number of colors to a third or a half of what you got now and make the darkest shades darker. Keep working! I'd also suggest adding a dark background, because it'll give it a lot of dark-room ambience. I actually like that about this piece. And to be quite frank, in shadows...colors DO converge to the same bluish tone. And I didn't use nearly all those colors. I skipped around. Just made the palettes for the look of it. Originally posted by So-lou This looks so great, blue - you have come so far skill-wise. I think it would benefit a lot more to have his right side (to us, his left) a bit darker to contrast with the brightness on his left. Use some of the colours in his hair pallette a tad on his pants and vest and arm. It's looking great - AND got me excited for the sixth book. XD I do agree here. He needs a darker left [his right] side...I'll work on that. (: EDIT: worked on it!  |
Posted By: Saiklor
Date Posted: 14 July 2005 at 7:59am
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and remember guys! Don't buy the American version, mail-order a copy
from Canada! Our's (and practically everyone else's from around the
world, but not America's) are made from 100% ancient forest friendly
recycled paper. WHERE WOULD THE CENTAURS LIVE IF WE TOOK DOWN THEIR FOREST???? |
Posted By: sedgemonkey
Date Posted: 14 July 2005 at 8:47am
Silly Saiklor... ancient forests make the best and most delicious smelling paper. I'm suprised you didn't know that. 
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Posted By: blue
Date Posted: 14 July 2005 at 12:41pm
This is the very start of the background I'm doing...the VERY start...  |
Posted By: kankki
Date Posted: 14 July 2005 at 12:44pm
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This background is going to be very good if you continue working on it!
------------- Well, duuuh, I can eat spam if I have to!
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Posted By: So-lou
Date Posted: 14 July 2005 at 7:36pm
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Aaaah that looks much better! You've pixelled him perfectly.
OH NOOOO I'd have left the background out because I'm lazy XD you're going to have to pixel shadows, the light from his patronus charm on the trees, ground...etc. Good luck (but I bet you'll pull it off)
------------- -So-lou |
Posted By: Ensellitis
Date Posted: 14 July 2005 at 8:02pm
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After seeing Blue pull off Harry this well, I have no diubt that the background will be spectacular
------------- There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross. |
Posted By: Amythist
Date Posted: 15 July 2005 at 6:34pm
| and now i understand why you dropped EE n such. I looove this hun. I can't wait to see the completed piece. |
Posted By: iSTVAN
Date Posted: 15 July 2005 at 7:39pm
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I know you've mentioned that you didnt want to change the proportions, but no matter how long I look at it I cant get over the horribly disproportioned right arm. Its a massive distraction from the otherwise beautiful work. The arm is in such an awkard position, considering the character is supposed to be holding some sort of offensive pose. I'd also consider shifting the legs apart much further. This would make him seem more action-esque and less like his body has just been charmed with some sort of constricting spell. Just try standing like he is, and you'll find pretty quickly how unnatural it is- even for a wizard. I know its late into the piece, but this is killing me to see! On another note, I love the dithering on the vest, and the hair looks incredible. Good luck with the background! |
Posted By: blue
Date Posted: 15 July 2005 at 9:59pm
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Hmm. It might not actually be that bad to fix these things, since I
still have every stage of the piece saved in layers. (: I was planning
on doing an animation when I'm done...and it's not that hard to redo
things you've already done... can you help me out by showing me how you'd like the arm to be? Even if it were just a loose sketch, so I can get some idea of what I did wrong? I really don't see what's wrong with it. I do agree about the legs, though, and might be able to play with those... |
Posted By: PixelSnader
Date Posted: 16 July 2005 at 3:45am
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my mom bought tha latest 'potter book for me, but she wont give it to me untill next week because ''ill read it before were on holiday and thats what she bought it for'' ------------- ▄▄█ ▄▄█ ▄█▄ ▄█▄ |
Posted By: Sibix
Date Posted: 16 July 2005 at 3:52am
| that stag is great. i think he should be walking forwards though so maybe you should make his right foot be leg be bent back a bit at the knee and him be on his toes (like walking lol) and also, i think maybe bring his right arm towards the body abit as it sticks out a bit too far ?? |
Posted By: blue
Date Posted: 17 July 2005 at 6:17pm
  tried to take iSTVAN's advice...spread the legs apart a bit...and a new arm outline. Better? EDIT: ah yes, and I'm ditching the old BG, going to try something completely different...I'll play with for something else. (; |
Posted By: ..::Naso::..
Date Posted: 17 July 2005 at 6:23pm
| Looks great! the new way the arm is gives it more i dunno, dramatic pose i like it |
Posted By: Saboteur
Date Posted: 17 July 2005 at 7:42pm
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Ah, but the original pose was more of a lunge. I'd suggest making your friend to do the pose you want, so you can see what it looks like. ------------- "I was minding my own business and walking across a pebbled path, and a Duck started giving me the business." |
Posted By: blue
Date Posted: 17 July 2005 at 9:20pm
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Originally posted by Saboteur Ah, but the original pose was more of a lunge. I'd suggest making your friend to do the pose you want, so you can see what it looks like. huh? what friend? |
Posted By: Saiklor
Date Posted: 17 July 2005 at 10:36pm
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you have no friends :( heehee, sorry, had to be said I think they meant get a friend to pose for you to show you how a dramatic lunge would look. |
Posted By: blue
Date Posted: 17 July 2005 at 10:48pm
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Well, I don't really wan't a lunge. That's not what Harry does. http://imagecache2.allposters.com/images/PF/PF_924254.jpg http://www.preview-online.com/s2004/feature_articles/azkab an/images/wand.gif even screaming, his hand is clenched in a fist at his side. By the way, Saiklor, my PI PMs weren't working so I e-mailed you on the account you signed up with. |