Need help to improve my work.
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
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Printed Date: 11 September 2025 at 11:23pm
Topic: Need help to improve my work.
Posted By: Kaz21
Subject: Need help to improve my work.
Date Posted: 19 October 2007 at 3:44pm
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Hey Everyone,
I registered yesterday and both of my pixel arts wasnt approved(actually I submitted 7 wich wernt but they were old anyway so i deleted them), I would agree that the plushie ninja one wasnt very good but I thought my lil dudes one was really good.
Here is the link to my profile:
http://www.pixeljoint.com/p/12960.htm?sec=icons - http://www.pixeljoint.com/p/12960.htm?sec=icons
If you click into the plushie ninja link you can see what it is based off.
Hope you can help me.
Kaz~
P.S The plushie ninja is also my avatar.
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Replies:
Posted By: MashPotato
Date Posted: 19 October 2007 at 5:40pm
Welcome to PJ  Don't feel disheartened by by the lil dude one not being approved, it's very difficult to get those into the gallery nowadays because people are kinda tired of them.As for the plushie ninja, it's a cute start but I think you can fix this up a bit more It looks a bit flat, and the somewhat pillow-shaded body doesn't match the direction of the lightsource (assuming the dark patch is a shadow being casted). I don't think so much of that dithering pattern is necessary either.Good luck fixing this up! PS: I suggest hosting using a image hosting site to post your pictures directly in the forum so it's easier for people to zoom in and help you ------------- http://theindiestone.com - the INDIE STONE |
Posted By: Kaz21
Date Posted: 19 October 2007 at 5:50pm
| Thankyou for your reply, I'll try to fix up the plushie ninja a little bit later because I've been working on something new for a while. But thanks for helping. |