Spaceship
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 12 September 2025 at 6:19am
Topic: Spaceship
Posted By: BlackDragon
Subject: Spaceship
Date Posted: 10 November 2007 at 9:09am
Yay
 I need some advise on the flame animation.
Lighsource is in front because I might use it in a game, and it would rotate. It keeps the light kinda in one place so it looks better.
By the way, this looks best on a black background.
Progress:
  EDIT1:
  ------------- "A little pain never hurt anyone." - Blueberry_Pie |
Replies:
Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 10 November 2007 at 1:19pm
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Pillowshading will never look better. Light from the top or from the front. Right now the wings are lit alright from the ship's front, but the hull needs to be reshaded no matter where light is coming from.
Is the red on the ship supposed to be from the flames' light? If so, you should make the flame look really BRIGHT so it's obviously able to shine on things. Take out the dark red or maybe lighten it some, and increase the flames' saturation. Also, the red pixels above the wings should be removed as I really doubt they'd be influenced that much at their distance from the flame.
As far as ship design goes, the way the thruster sticks out behind the wings looks odd. If it lifts off vertically like a rocket, the wings would be important for stability before takeoff, so the thruster should be nearer to the front of the ship, or the wings should be nearer to the back. The tips are also shaded a bit oddly; the brightest flame-induced highlights should be on the inside (nearer to the thruster) side of the wings but right now they're on the outside. One last crit: The wing pointing to us looks like it's shorter than the others. Lengthen it, I say.
For practical pruposes the ball on the front would break its rod and fall off when you launch, but since this is a pretty cartoony style that probably doesn't matter much. ------------- http://pixelmonkey.ensellitis.com"> 
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Posted By: BlackDragon
Date Posted: 11 November 2007 at 6:01am
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Fixed most of the problems. Someone please kindly show me how to shade the hull! ------------- "A little pain never hurt anyone." - Blueberry_Pie |
Posted By: Skaka
Date Posted: 11 November 2007 at 7:15am
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I'm assuming this is a space shooter? If so what I'd do is pick a common location for the sun in each level and shade it based on that :P
------------- Ars longa, vita brevis. |
Posted By: BlackDragon
Date Posted: 11 November 2007 at 9:14am
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Actually going for a Lunar Lander or space exploration game.
More progress:
Thickened side wings and touched up some. ------------- "A little pain never hurt anyone." - Blueberry_Pie |