Mafia
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 12 September 2025 at 9:08am
Topic: Mafia
Posted By: Fuzzyleaves
Subject: Mafia
Date Posted: 18 December 2007 at 8:21am
 THis needs revision! With what? I might rinkle the shirt, and change the shoes, But how else can i change it?
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Replies:
Posted By: Wuuhuu
Date Posted: 18 December 2007 at 9:55am
| Hmm.. give some shadows in his face maybe, and come light reflection at his glasses, etc. |
Posted By: NotSure
Date Posted: 18 December 2007 at 4:05pm
| I know it is the style, but the square jaw does not suit a "Nerd". If you want to run with the nerd theme, pull the pants up much further, and add a pocket protector (it would not look out of place as a white handkerchief is often worn in the same pocket). |
Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 18 December 2007 at 9:18pm
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the lack of AA in the Font compared to the Over AA'ed character appears to be the problem. not to mention that, even when it tries to mimic the vector style, its desing is a bit boring, and maybe could be improved here and there(i.e. square jaw thing mentioned above). this is good, you just need to improve some details and that's all. ------------- I ate leel's babies |
Posted By: Fuzzyleaves
Date Posted: 19 December 2007 at 11:43am
 my horrible try at a reflection... will remove pink (soon to be trans)Better? ------------- <a href = "http://www.nitrome.com" > <img src = "http://www.nitrome.com/images/links/nitrome2_button.gif" width="88" height="31"/></a> |