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(WIP) Blob Party

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Category: Pixel Art
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Topic: (WIP) Blob Party
Posted By: Wuuhuu
Subject: (WIP) Blob Party
Date Posted: 21 December 2007 at 4:21am
Well, I made this after seeing OMGFossil's open head bin blob and this came out, and I thought of posting it here before submitting it.

C&C please.

EDIT: Now I am going to make a blob party instead.

This is what I got yet, I know it is not the greatest, but tell me what to do more. I have no clue.


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Posted By: Skull
Date Posted: 21 December 2007 at 4:37am
I think you've got too many colours in there..

The red at the bottom looks much too dark.


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Posted By: Wuuhuu
Date Posted: 21 December 2007 at 4:41am
Yeah, I didnt notice, thanks, i'll fix that.
anything more?

Posted By: xeroxz2k7
Date Posted: 21 December 2007 at 4:45am
You can easily remove two colours from the top. ^^

Posted By: Wuuhuu
Date Posted: 21 December 2007 at 4:46am
wow, I tried and it was all messed, every time i tried to pick a colour to the background to make it transparent at www.iaza.com, It just picked another colour from the blob! How come?

Posted By: volcom
Date Posted: 21 December 2007 at 12:10pm
 
i dunno why, be cool for like a slush despenser..made in 1min. I'd be cool to do something similar


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Posted By: BlackDragon
Date Posted: 21 December 2007 at 12:25pm
Beware, long post ahead...
OK, so here is my edit. There are many things changed here, so I will explain in parts.
  1. Lineart- This could be improved a bit. Since this is a slime and therefore a liquid, it should "flow" and have no jaggy lines or anything.
  2. Coloring- It sorta hurt my eyes, so I turned down the saturation. To make it more interesting, I added a slight hue shift. Instead of a "clean" color ramp, I went from Orange-Red-Purple. Some selout (changing outline color due to light) was added too. Also less colors, from 10 down to 6. You could prolly take out the black and make it 5, as it is a little harsh.
  3. Shading- Your shading was flat. I assume this lil guy is translucent, no? You can see for yourself the changes I made.
  4. Other stuff- AA'ed. Turned the eyes a bit, as it looked twisted.


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"A little pain never hurt anyone." - Blueberry_Pie

Posted By: Wuuhuu
Date Posted: 21 December 2007 at 1:00pm
Originally posted by BlackDragon

Beware, long post ahead...
OK, so here is my edit. There are many things changed here, so I will explain in parts.
  1. Lineart- This could be improved a bit. Since this is a slime and therefore a liquid, it should "flow" and have no jaggy lines or anything.
  2. Coloring- It sorta hurt my eyes, so I turned down the saturation. To make it more interesting, I added a slight hue shift. Instead of a "clean" color ramp, I went from Orange-Red-Purple. Some selout (changing outline color due to light) was added too. Also less colors, from 10 down to 6. You could prolly take out the black and make it 5, as it is a little harsh.
  3. Shading- Your shading was flat. I assume this lil guy is translucent, no? You can see for yourself the changes I made.
  4. Other stuff- AA'ed. Turned the eyes a bit, as it looked twisted.


Okey, I'll try to edit that guy right away(unless I get stopped).

EDIT:
I dont really know if I fixed the line art, but I liked it that way, and also,
I want the eyes like that, it gives it a feeling like they just been throwed them at the jelly. Cause it looks like jelly now xD

Posted By: BlackDragon
Date Posted: 21 December 2007 at 6:08pm
Some bad jaggies, thats all. The new lines kinda took away the "jellyness" of this guy though...
The eyes look better now because he is taller.
If another edit is in order I will be happy to do so.


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"A little pain never hurt anyone." - Blueberry_Pie

Posted By: Wuuhuu
Date Posted: 22 December 2007 at 2:59am
Go ahead. I'll try to fix it later today when I have time.


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