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Stupid muse... [WiP, of course]

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Topic: Stupid muse... [WiP, of course]
Posted By: Blu
Subject: Stupid muse... [WiP, of course]
Date Posted: 25 January 2008 at 10:11pm
Mmk... So, I am pixelling my muse! First time in a long time, really... Whenever I've portrayed it, it's been on a base so it's easier for me, but now I'm getting into pixelling, and... aaah
 
Here's what I have:
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The bright colors are very unlikely to change, as that is the color of my muse, dang it >_>
 
Normal ref pic: http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j76/MassCat/Pixels/Museref.jpg - http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j76/MassCat/Pixels/Museref.jpg
Pic with  lines drawn on it to help me see where the muscles and whatever are...silly fur:
 
Very, very small (and VERY OLD) picture of my muse:
 
The chest and front paws are what are bugging me the most. Help is very much appreciated.  (And redlines (your drawing over what I have) are welcomed.)


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Gremlins rule the world; you just don't know it yet.



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Posted By: MuTiX
Date Posted: 26 January 2008 at 1:35am
try to do like ref you place.
at that moment your lines... her downhalf seems too static, compared to the upper one. give it more dynamic as it is on ref.


Posted By: Blu
Date Posted: 26 January 2008 at 7:03am
I'm not quite sure I understand what you mean... :/ I don't see exactly what's wrong/what you're trying to point out...
 
Edit: Do you mean: "What they're saying in the front is really good and fluid, but the back is kinda stiff"?


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Gremlins rule the world; you just don't know it yet.


Posted By: BlackDragon
Date Posted: 26 January 2008 at 10:10am

Yes, I thin that is what Mutix is trying to say. The back legs in your ref are angled out more while in your Muse they are pointed upwards. This gives it a static feel; it almost looks as if he is standing.

Also I suggest giving it muscles because some if its front limbs look like noodles.



Posted By: Blu
Date Posted: 26 January 2008 at 10:23pm
*Nods* Figured so.
 
Ah, muscles would be a good idea. ^^; Will update a little later... :] 


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Gremlins rule the world; you just don't know it yet.


Posted By: MuTiX
Date Posted: 27 January 2008 at 1:01am
Yes. member_profile.asp?PF=6041&FID=8 - BlackDragon is right. I want to say that.

Ps Sorry for my english )


Posted By: Blu
Date Posted: 27 January 2008 at 10:39am
That's okay. ^^
 
How's this? =x
 
Edit: I can change its right arm completely if it would help for it to look better.


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Gremlins rule the world; you just don't know it yet.


Posted By: Amorphous
Date Posted: 27 January 2008 at 11:17am
As of right now it seems that the front leg facing us is lifted completely off the ground. I don't know if you wanted that effect, but it seems strange.


Posted By: Blu
Date Posted: 27 January 2008 at 12:04pm
Yeah, it looks off to me... I might make it be coming forward more, like it's trying to get the tribble (that's what it's chasing, yes, a plot tribble! all fuzzy...) with both paws.
 
...Yes. >_>


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Gremlins rule the world; you just don't know it yet.


Posted By: Blu
Date Posted: 27 January 2008 at 2:58pm
*Sneakydouble posts*
 
Made the front paws hands and changed the position of the arm as well as made the back leg less bulky.
 
I think the back legs are still bugging me, but I'm not certain. :/ I'd say my muse is pouncing the grey tribble-like-creature.
 
Feh. >.<


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Gremlins rule the world; you just don't know it yet.



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