Puffle Beds: Help Pls!
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Category: Pixel Art
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Printed Date: 22 April 2026 at 10:26am
Topic: Puffle Beds: Help Pls!
Posted By: Bloo
Subject: Puffle Beds: Help Pls!
Date Posted: 17 March 2008 at 12:08am
Help, guys! I made a puffle beds but it hasn't been approved yet! http://pixeljoint.com/p/14128.htm - Delfos suggested that I put my work here to get help and tips, so I put it here XD. Anyway here it is:   Is there anything to add??? Anything I should fix?? Please tell me if you will  ! |
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Posted By: xeroxz2k7
Date Posted: 17 March 2008 at 12:42am
| How about trying to add more details and de-saturate the colours? =P |
Posted By: AndyOaks
Date Posted: 17 March 2008 at 3:03am
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The first thing that struck me was the subtle shadow shades. Try darkening the shadow colours and this'll go someway to improving the form. You may wish to add a few more colour values too and try and round off the shape a little more. At the moment they appear quite flat even though your outline is pretty spot on. Presentation could be improved as well. You have them in a neat line at the moment but it might be worth re organising them into a more interest formation. On a personal note, I would of added a slight difference to each bed so they didn't look like carbon copies. You're on the right tracks though. It won't take a lot oto make these look great. |
Posted By: Bloo
Date Posted: 27 March 2008 at 4:21am
| I won't finish it for now, sorry. Good-bye and thanks everybody for your help. I'll make a new piece of art. |