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Blweh

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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 11 September 2025 at 2:18am


Topic: Blweh
Posted By: l3m0n5
Subject: Blweh
Date Posted: 02 April 2008 at 2:55pm
Just a quick wip i decided to make, the head kinda reminds me of one of Lar's well known character helmet things. But yeah i dont know why the lighting doesn't FEEEEEL right...




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Posted By: Hatch
Date Posted: 03 April 2008 at 7:17am
What exactly... Is it? :o I mean is it supposed to be a realistic human, or...?

Regardless, maybe consider working with more than one ramp? I'm as hardcore about color conservation as anyone, but it's going to look like a plastic figurine or something is it's all green.

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Posted By: l3m0n5
Date Posted: 03 April 2008 at 12:57pm
ouch, if its not even readable then i got a problem right there :/ its supposed to be a random guy in a helmet wearing one of those puffy winter jackets, with his head looking a bit down.  but yea i made a little update..




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"Hate is my enemy, Life is short and Life is plenty, keep my eyes on my path cuz i know who sent me"


Posted By: 0xDB
Date Posted: 03 April 2008 at 1:06pm
Maybe play around with different approaches of the specular light on the visor, making it more like the reflected light on the other parts (roundish and not long) and see if that makes the lighting feel more right.

Or if seen from the top, the visor is shaped circular, maybe the stripes of reflected light on it should run straight down, instead of diagonally... but I don't know for sure, you'd have to try that to see whether it's better.


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Posted By: l3m0n5
Date Posted: 03 April 2008 at 1:56pm
yeah your right, thats also been buggin me...
well, let the experimentation begin!




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"Hate is my enemy, Life is short and Life is plenty, keep my eyes on my path cuz i know who sent me"


Posted By: 0xDB
Date Posted: 04 April 2008 at 2:47pm
I'm don't like those color breaks (blue/green/blue/green) as they don't seem to serve any purpose, but I think that new lighting on the visor looks way better than before. Nice improvement.


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Posted By: Hatch
Date Posted: 04 April 2008 at 3:37pm
Originally posted by l3m0n5

ouch, if its not even readable then i got a problem right there :/ its supposed to be a random guy in a helmet wearing one of those puffy winter jackets, with his head looking a bit down


Sorry, I didn't actually mean that like it came out. I just wasn't sure if you were going for realistic anatomy or something cartoony or what. Anyhow, it looks like the left (our left) shoulder and part of the arm should be obscured by his body. And, if you're going for anything realistic, shoulders should be way broader and the head should be way smaller.

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Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 05 April 2008 at 8:23pm
I'm not a big fan of that messy lineart. Either giving the desired shapes a revision, or a complete overhaul would fix them.

In my honest Opinion.


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