Anime girl WIP
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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 10 September 2025 at 11:38pm
Topic: Anime girl WIP
Posted By: Sabata
Subject: Anime girl WIP
Date Posted: 01 June 2008 at 6:49pm
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Thought of posting anything... My...2....3...attempt on a portrait (some kind of) I dont know I usually get attracted there when I have nothing to pixel, so I just trow myself at making some anime style like portrait....anyways c&c plz face is done (at least for me) hair is a wip   Updated. ------------- We fall to rise again. |
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Posted By: Mikedssx
Date Posted: 02 June 2008 at 5:39am
| The eye on the right needs to be moved over 1 pixel atleast thats what I think. And I bit more contrast on the skin shadow, right now you can't really tell whats going on. |
Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 02 June 2008 at 1:34pm
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the banding on the face must be taken away. and indeed, eyes could 1 or two pixels lower.
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Posted By: Larwick
Date Posted: 02 June 2008 at 3:14pm
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No way guys. Mikedssx, the eyes are both centred. And it isn't noticeable that the artist wasn't aiming that way. Metaru, they're already quite low! I think her hair goes too high. If it was that high, it would need more volume all the way around to look right imo. I think the anime eyes are horrible, but hey. I'd suggest "(o)" not "(o(". Keep it up, not bad start. :) -------------  http://larw-ck.deviantart.com">
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Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 02 June 2008 at 4:26pm
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is the hair, ondeed, that is messing the face. when you see such amount of hair extended upwards, you think the head is tilted downwards. but the face is portrayed in a front view, thats why i though the eyes needed to be lowered, to match the hair. so the problem here is not the face, (or the eyes). is the hair who needs to be reduced to at least 1/2 of its current height. about the eyes, if you were planning a specific expresion with those eyes drawing them that way (o( then the mouth and eyelashes should follow this expression. but if its just an idle, normal face, then you should portrait them in a nomal (o). ------------- I ate leel's babies |
Posted By: Larwick
Date Posted: 02 June 2008 at 7:02pm
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Yup, what Metaru said. :) Now i look at it again the eyes look quite good with a squinting expression. However, this could still be greatly improved by using more purposeful lines. Eyebrows would help, as well as creases below the eyes etc. ------------- http://larw-ck.deviantart.com">
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Posted By: Sabata
Date Posted: 03 June 2008 at 2:11pm
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hmmm thanks guys. I cut out a little of hair and made some modifications on face expression...also added some outlines to the hair but not sure its needed there... I am actually afraid of adding any highlights there...always was afraid of making hair  ------------- We fall to rise again. |
Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 03 June 2008 at 10:35pm
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in anime and manga higlights are just there to give more life to the hair. not that it really follows any knid of ligthsoruce(just an esthetic resource)  almost forgot: pay attention to these shadows at the sides of the lips. they look as if there was some kind of division between the jaw and the rest of the skull, just like in a ventriloquist doll. thats caused by these extra darker pixels in the jaw area ------------- I ate leel's babies |