Room Project [Completed]
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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 12 September 2025 at 11:53pm
Topic: Room Project [Completed]
Posted By: Zoomrix
Subject: Room Project [Completed]
Date Posted: 06 August 2005 at 1:57pm
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This is "THE Room" http://zoomrix.com/other/myroom.html - CLICK HERE FOR THE FLASH ANIMATION OF THIS PROJECT!!! ________________________ To Do List: Interactivization (sorry for the goofy word) I want to make this look the best it can using my own pixeling skills so any help (edits for the to study, critique for me read, yelling for things I did wrong) Be tough but helpfull on critiqing or be thoughtful and logical, whoever you decide to help me - I will appreciate it! 8) Thank you,
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Posted By: jegHegy
Date Posted: 06 August 2005 at 5:11pm
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i love the chairs. :)
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Posted By: Zoomrix
Date Posted: 06 August 2005 at 5:14pm
Thank you. :) But I'm going to need much more feedback than that lol. But thanks anyway.  ------------- http://zoomrix.com - My Portfolio |
Posted By: pixelblink
Date Posted: 06 August 2005 at 5:18pm
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I think it's starting to come together nicely. One thing I will point out is that you have everything outlined properly except for the legs of the desk and the chair cushions could use a darker one. ------------- |
Posted By: Zoomrix
Date Posted: 06 August 2005 at 5:27pm
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Did you mean to say "darker tone"? Well in reality the chairs are even more lighter, kind of a light sandy color on the cushons. I tried to get as close to that as I could. And I'm not sure what you mean by the legs... do you mean the bottom of the table legs or just the whole thing in general? :S ------------- http://zoomrix.com - My Portfolio |
Posted By: leel
Date Posted: 06 August 2005 at 6:00pm
I think Pb meant the chair cushions need a darker 'one' meaning outline. And I'd say that the whole metal table legs part should have an outline to be consistent w/ everything else in the room. Not much feedback I can offer, looks like you've got everything down , just keep working on the things on your list ;)
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Posted By: pixelblink
Date Posted: 06 August 2005 at 6:34pm
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Leel : That's exactly what I meant/said ------------- |
Posted By: Zoomrix
Date Posted: 06 August 2005 at 6:49pm
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Oh ok. I"ll fix the table then. :) EDIT: I did my best to find that sandy color again and made it a big darker.
I tested out the outlines with the legs of the table, it just doens't look good, I think they are fine now since they are so tiny already, an outline would either make them fat or too thin. I just wanted to check with you guys if you found anything wrong with it. I guess now I'm going to continue ------------- http://zoomrix.com - My Portfolio |
Posted By: Zoomrix
Date Posted: 28 August 2005 at 11:49am
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I hope it's okay to doulbe post if art/work is being updated because that's exactly what I'm doing. I have worked on the flash'ing of the project all day yesterday and pretty much have it all completed. I just have to replace the unfinished bed with the finished one... when I finish it http://zoomrix.com/other/myroom.html - CLICK HERE FOR THE FLASH ANIMATION OF THIS PROJECT!!! ------------- http://zoomrix.com - My Portfolio |
Posted By: pixelblink
Date Posted: 28 August 2005 at 12:33pm
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nicely done dude but, why not have the image stay once it's completed falling down? ------------- |
Posted By: Zoomrix
Date Posted: 28 August 2005 at 12:37pm
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Well part of it because I want to have the credits. I didn't know how else to implement them into the movie... Any suggestions? ------------- http://zoomrix.com - My Portfolio |