A few characters
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Category: Pixel Art
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Printed Date: 12 September 2025 at 11:36am
Topic: A few characters
Posted By: Fatalis67
Subject: A few characters
Date Posted: 06 October 2008 at 5:30pm
I made these two characters to practice working on a small scale. I think they turned out decently for the time I spent on them.
 A chef (if you can't tell I'm doing something seriously wrong)
 Some kind of soldier/guard
How can I improve them?
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Posted By: hsn2555
Date Posted: 06 October 2008 at 10:03pm
Posted By: Fatalis67
Date Posted: 07 October 2008 at 4:20pm
 I added some better shading to the soldier. The shading I used originally was too subtle.
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Posted By: hsn2555
Date Posted: 07 October 2008 at 4:47pm
if you don't mind ,see how i shaded the helmet.

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Posted By: Souly
Date Posted: 07 October 2008 at 5:02pm
Don't dither metal.. I like the stance you have with the pike though.

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I am the jesus of PJ.
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Posted By: Fatalis67
Date Posted: 07 October 2008 at 7:41pm
So basically my problem is the shading doesn't suggest the shape of the helmet well enough?
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Posted By: Quake
Date Posted: 08 October 2008 at 7:23am
Nope, the dithering is the problem..
Dithering, creates a look that suggests something is bumpy, and although sometimes that's good with Metal, Dithering is bad..
Just use cell-shading (don't know what else to call it)..
Look at Souly, he has shown you what i meant.
-Quake
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Posted By: Fatalis67
Date Posted: 08 October 2008 at 7:30am
I didn't dither at any point. That was hsn's edit. But I took note of the changes Souly made and this is what I did.

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Posted By: hsn2555
Date Posted: 08 October 2008 at 7:57am
am i the mistaken now xD ?
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Posted By: Fatalis67
Date Posted: 08 October 2008 at 7:06pm
Not at all, I'm just saying I don't want him to think I did something I didn't do if it takes away from his liking of my piece.
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Posted By: Souly
Date Posted: 08 October 2008 at 8:07pm
I was speaking to hsn2555... I was commenting on his 'edit'
------------- http://punky.ensellitis.com">
I am the jesus of PJ.
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Posted By: Fatalis67
Date Posted: 09 October 2008 at 2:00am
Oh,I misunderstood you, sorry.
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