Demon - WIP
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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 12 September 2025 at 8:30pm
Topic: Demon - WIP
Posted By: zi-double
Subject: Demon - WIP
Date Posted: 15 August 2005 at 12:18am
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Among other wees try to make one large WIP demon ... I dislike his axe ... I think need part at the back !!! In second variant have very dark part behind axe /on the stomach/ !?
Thanks for all C&C in advance ... ======================= :) GDGB :) |
Replies:
Posted By: Wannahlakujuu
Date Posted: 15 August 2005 at 6:36am
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Ok, I don't really understand what you just said, so I'll just comment on the image. Firstly, I love the eyes, they look very evil. Also, the horns and hair look great, and the background that you did on the first image. Now, the things I don't like are the torso, it looks a little pillow-shaded, as does the rest of the skin. I actually like the better in the first one, it fits the pose more, and looks like he has a steady grip. |
Posted By: sedgemonkey
Date Posted: 15 August 2005 at 9:58am
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I like the position of the axe where it is coming towards us. The other axe position looks ackward. His right arm seems a little "tucked in". Maybe if the elbow came out a little bit to balance. His right foot looks a little stumpy, that front on position is a real pain to pull off so it doesn't look weird. Other than that it looks really good dude. |
Posted By: Bear
Date Posted: 15 August 2005 at 12:28pm
| pillow shading, anatomy, colors |
Posted By: zi-double
Date Posted: 15 August 2005 at 11:28pm
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just some progress ... here repair I think 30-40% from his body for now ...
Thanks Wannahlakujuu such comments always make me to sit down and work more :) I'll try for elbow sedge Bear ... about colours ... hm I think they must to be dark with more brown ? ======================= :) GDGB :) |
Posted By: Wannahlakujuu
Date Posted: 16 August 2005 at 8:02am
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That looks a lot better, torso and everything. One thing is that his right leg, the shin, looks a little too wide, or fat. Might just be me, but it just looks off. Anyway, great improvement from the first one on the torso and legs. Great job |