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Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
URL: https://pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=7445
Printed Date: 11 September 2025 at 10:17am
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Posted By: 1up
Subject: this is an title
Date Posted: 27 November 2008 at 9:58am
 figured i should probably start getting crits on these bc tsr isn't really helping too much first one has 17 colors iirc, and the second one has 12. i've been using different palettes for each one too so yeah |
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Posted By: Damian
Date Posted: 27 November 2008 at 1:42pm
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I like the new style....my twin doesn't though XD
Different colour Palettes. Why? The second one seems to have matching colours with the Blues there, are could easily use a few colours from the first cutting down on colours. Thats your decision though. My fave out of all of these is the second last one, I just love the pose and feeling from that piece. May I ask what this is for? or is it just to see how your style has changed over 1 years time period? ------------- |
Posted By: 1up
Date Posted: 27 November 2008 at 2:38pm
yeah, it's just to see how much I changed really. and the different palettes is more just me trying to get better working at making new palettes from scratch, since i tend to reuse them from old pieces over and over started on the 3rd one too |
Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 27 November 2008 at 2:41pm
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I can not wait for the 2009 versions!
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Posted By: Saboteur
Date Posted: 27 November 2008 at 3:13pm
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The 2009 versions kick the absolute sh*t out of the 2008 ones. Whatever drugs you're on, I want some... though I get the feeling I should be asking Souly. There's a definite Souly feel to the characters. Ys, very good. Not an overly large fan of the overly large hat, but all else is pure success. ------------- "I was minding my own business and walking across a pebbled path, and a Duck started giving me the business." |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 27 November 2008 at 7:49pm
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Originally posted by Lollige I can not wait for the 2009 versions! The quote of the year!!! I love the hat on the first one being bigger but it seems out of scale 'at the head' not the height, that's cool. ------------- |
Posted By: 1up
Date Posted: 27 November 2008 at 8:41pm
 IT SURE IS FAT MAN'S CROTCHULAR AREA IN HERE not really sure what you mean about the hat though :T |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 27 November 2008 at 9:00pm
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Posted By: 1up
Date Posted: 27 November 2008 at 9:18pm
ah, i'll fix that then also im getting the feeling i made the fat guys legs too detailed |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 27 November 2008 at 9:33pm
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I say not, because the focus of attention on the fat guy is the belly (were the eyes goes naturally first). Unless you make the shirt show the bellybutton, or add some interest there, then the detailed pants balances things off and will make the hand not stand out too much... ...imho :) ------------- |
Posted By: ellie-is
Date Posted: 28 November 2008 at 4:49am
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Awesome. As people have said, 2009 version shall kick some ass :P Also, I liked it better when you could see the fat guy's belly. |
Posted By: 1up
Date Posted: 28 November 2008 at 2:08pm
 decided to just redo the shirt and hair so yeah edit: puttin off the hat  |
Posted By: Reo
Date Posted: 28 November 2008 at 2:16pm
I love that fatty To to keen on the hat tho... |
Posted By: 1up
Date Posted: 28 November 2008 at 4:10pm
alright so i hopefully finished the fat guy, but i've been staring at it for too long to see if there's any problems i'll fix the hat and start on the next guy some time tomorrow |
Posted By: Sig~
Date Posted: 28 November 2008 at 4:37pm
| The fat guy is awesome! I want to see the others characters |
Posted By: 1up
Date Posted: 29 November 2008 at 4:08pm
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oh i thought i posted the new one already guess not  |
Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 30 November 2008 at 2:48am
| Great work on the leather jacket detail, I really like it. :) You should think about doing animations with some of them. :) |
Posted By: Damian
Date Posted: 30 November 2008 at 5:51am
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Fourth Guy owns!
I just love the style! ------------- |
Posted By: 1up
Date Posted: 30 November 2008 at 1:42pm
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Originally posted by Aleiav Great work on the leather jacket detail, I really like it. :) You should think about doing animations with some of them. :) haha, i would if i could animate something this big  IT SURE IS MULTIPLE LIGHTSOURCES IN HERE |
Posted By: x-death
Date Posted: 30 November 2008 at 10:05pm
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2007 versions: well you've probably realized all of this already but the contrast on there eyes is to high. and the darker colors around the outside wrecks the sprites. 2008 versions: well i would say that your line art could be refined rather quickly. as you can still see overlapping pixels on your black outline. and from there i would say having blended outlines on them would really help. the fat guy is good, the last one hasn't been finished yet, the second guys gun looks as if it was never finished. the first guys just needs work with its outlines and all of that. and the third one i would say needs to have a bit more shading overall and needs to have finished fire on his hands, or what ever it is suppose to be. |