chopper
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Category: Pixel Art
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Printed Date: 13 September 2025 at 2:28am
Topic: chopper
Posted By: glitchey
Subject: chopper
Date Posted: 20 August 2005 at 8:06pm
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hiya! im currently working on a vietnam esque chopper right now give me some good C&C
------------- "you sunk my jangerjam!" homsar |
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Posted By: Shark
Date Posted: 21 August 2005 at 4:17am
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i think it needs some more roundness, its all kinda boxy!
camo pattern is pretty gd but the legs need more shading |
Posted By: PixelSnader
Date Posted: 21 August 2005 at 2:39pm
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2 often used qoutes: -use reference http://www.fas.org/man/dod-101/sys/ac/uh-1.htm - http://www.fas.org/man/dod-101/sys/ac/uh-1.htm ------------- ▄▄█ ▄▄█ ▄█▄ ▄█▄ |
Posted By: glitchey
Date Posted: 22 August 2005 at 12:48am
 here we go, an updated version ------------- "you sunk my jangerjam!" homsar |
Posted By: Blueberry_pie
Date Posted: 22 August 2005 at 3:20am
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That's a big improvement... but it still looks a bit too 'blocky' to me.
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Posted By: Wannahlakujuu
Date Posted: 22 August 2005 at 7:09am
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Also, the wind shield is too jagged, and the line should more consistant, or something like that |
Posted By: Maestro
Date Posted: 22 August 2005 at 7:43am
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Yea well, what you can see from the reference that snader posted, is
that the rotor and the cockpit and the smaller rotor are out of
proportion. Look at the Huey! The smaller rotor is two thirds as big as
the cockpit! And as the guy above me pointed out, the windshield, well. It doesn't look like glass yet. The colours are allright, and I'm having problems with colouring myself, but the drawing itself needs more work. Keep it up though! |
Posted By: glitchey
Date Posted: 22 August 2005 at 3:40pm
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uhhh its not ment to be identical to a huey but ill fix your promblems
------------- "you sunk my jangerjam!" homsar |
Posted By: Pixel_Outlaw
Date Posted: 01 September 2005 at 9:31am
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Here is my two cents, Although the chopper blades are very thin 3 pixels they feel like lego chopper blades. I don't quite understand the ring around the tail section blades. It kinda looks like you're trying to make a chopper with a fighter jet fusealoge.I have a feeling that the tail should be a bit fatter ar the base, it would give it some bulky military muscle! Also move the blade base up from the center. Excellent work overall. Good effort! |
Posted By: glitchey
Date Posted: 06 September 2005 at 3:49pm
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ok ive got a final version with everything you siad fixed, any last minute complaints? ------------- "you sunk my jangerjam!" homsar |
Posted By: Pixel_Outlaw
Date Posted: 06 September 2005 at 4:02pm
| is there supposed to be an updated picture? If so we can't see it.... |
Posted By: glitchey
Date Posted: 12 September 2005 at 9:53pm
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sorry guys my comp has been dead recently im making this post from school, ill have an updated version the moment i get home ------------- "you sunk my jangerjam!" homsar |
Posted By: glitchey
Date Posted: 13 September 2005 at 1:55am
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right after battling my internet i can finnaly give you the (hope fully) final version http://img384.imageshack.us/img384/5913/zedamaphone6xc.png - http://img384.imageshack.us/img384/5913/zedamaphone6xc.png sorry about the lack of easy pics but my connection hates me ------------- "you sunk my jangerjam!" homsar |
Posted By: Joo Joo
Date Posted: 19 September 2005 at 9:46pm
Best one eva man!
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