mock up wip
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Topic: mock up wip
Posted By: TMH
Subject: mock up wip
Date Posted: 22 February 2009 at 3:54pm
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Replies:
Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 22 February 2009 at 4:41pm
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So, explain: What are we seing? Why is the man naked and does he have an extremely weird face? Why are the ducks on the wall that really freak your eyes out, and why are is the door curved? Note that I am not saying its bad, I just want you to think about things. ------------- |
Posted By: TMH
Date Posted: 22 February 2009 at 5:02pm
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the man is trying to find his clothes or he will be late for work, the ducks on the wall is wall paper and im sorry about your eyes. the door is curved cause thats what they look like in cartoons ive been working on it and...  ------------- |
Posted By: TMH
Date Posted: 22 February 2009 at 6:01pm
 update
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Posted By: cure
Date Posted: 22 February 2009 at 8:29pm
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Door shape is odd and handle is too high. Wallpaper is stealing too much attention away from the foreground. Item is spelled with a "t". Text in blue and grey are difficult to read. Not sure what's on the man's chin. Scene as a whole seems cramped. ------------- |
Posted By: TMH
Date Posted: 23 February 2009 at 1:21pm
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do you think that the door should be square? edit:  bg change sguare door, words fixed------------- |
Posted By: Platnium
Date Posted: 23 February 2009 at 1:39pm
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Some weird ass stairs, what is the point of them? ------------- 
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Posted By: TMH
Date Posted: 23 February 2009 at 1:59pm
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to walk down... no jk. i dunno
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Posted By: Quake
Date Posted: 25 February 2009 at 8:08am
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If there no reason you're adding it, don't make the text white and the door looks better :] |
Posted By: TMH
Date Posted: 02 March 2009 at 2:36pm
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im not sure why the text should be white and the stairs are there because the house has an upstairs
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Posted By: cure
Date Posted: 02 March 2009 at 7:37pm
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But the stairs don't lead to another floor, they just form a plateau a few feet above ground floor.
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Posted By: .Anubis.
Date Posted: 02 March 2009 at 8:35pm
| The mouth looks like a nose and the chin looks like lips, not sure what is what really, shading is pretty nice so far. But the face is kinda weird to read. |