Which Witch is Which? -Updated Again..-
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Printed Date: 13 September 2025 at 9:07am
Topic: Which Witch is Which? -Updated Again..-
Posted By: Cryssy
Subject: Which Witch is Which? -Updated Again..-
Date Posted: 06 September 2005 at 10:17pm
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Edit again: I hated the original skin color XD
YAY for harlots |
I am working I swear
Is this style of eye ok or should I trash it?
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Posted By: EyeCraft
Date Posted: 07 September 2005 at 3:45am
| Wow cool. This will look great when finished. Nice line art is always a pleasure. Her left eyebrow seems somewhat out of place though, I think its to do with the eyes. I mean the lower eyebrow would make the eye slightly shorter, because the skin isnt stretched unlike the raised one, try it in the mirror.. |
Posted By: randomblink
Date Posted: 07 September 2005 at 7:07am
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Very interesting... ------------- www.randomblink.com I am me... no! Really! |
Posted By: Cryssy
Date Posted: 07 September 2005 at 8:48am
| Thanks eyecraft. You always give great CC :) |
Posted By: EyeCraft
Date Posted: 07 September 2005 at 9:19pm
You're welcome  . Sometimes I think I nitpick though 
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Posted By: Saboteur
Date Posted: 07 September 2005 at 9:50pm
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Hey, I think we all think that. You don't, not from what I see, at least. Pleeeeeease don't keep the mirrored hand. This is looking like its gonna turn out to be a nice peice, and personally I think the mirrored hand would take from it a little. Actually, it might not look too bad, cause you're probably going to work with a set lightsource... but I still think it's a good idea to not have it mirrored. And hey, if you wanted to be nitpicky, you could point out that the smirk would probably raise the bottom left edge of the (our) right eye a pixel or two ------------- "I was minding my own business and walking across a pebbled path, and a Duck started giving me the business." |
Posted By: SpectreNectar
Date Posted: 09 September 2005 at 8:09am
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Shouldn't she be looking at the sphere? ------------- ~--- - |
Posted By: inkspot
Date Posted: 09 September 2005 at 2:02pm
| head shape, circle, square and hands are mirrored :D |
Posted By: Cryssy
Date Posted: 09 September 2005 at 3:17pm
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Originally posted by inkspot head shape, circle, square and hands are mirrored :D Umm if you can't give suggestions please don't post or even state the obvious.. :D Btw the circle isn't mirrored, there is a circle tool ;) Spectre: I haven't drawn the pupils yet :) |
Posted By: Citizen_Insane
Date Posted: 09 September 2005 at 5:14pm
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Originally posted by inkspot
head shape, circle, square and hands are mirrored :D I'm not sure if this is even a comment..
I've been holding out on crits because it's still really basic... I keep checking back to see if you have more of it done... how's it coming along? I agree that you should probably try drawing two different hands, just to switch it up a bit.. but it might not even matter. |
Posted By: Cryssy
Date Posted: 09 September 2005 at 5:22pm
| I am working on a step two to this. But I want a little more done for her first. |
Posted By: Citizen_Insane
Date Posted: 10 September 2005 at 12:35am
| ah.. no rush, then. take your time. |
Posted By: EyeCraft
Date Posted: 10 September 2005 at 10:53pm
Nice update! Glad to see you're still moving along with it  .
The eye colour I think is great, but I think you could be doing more
with them, it seems like just blocks of colour and lines over it in a
way. That white line seems to look unnatural or something. Try going
for a more reflective kind of eye if you want, I think that'd look
great.  Skin shading seems very smooth at this point, I'd just advise be mindful of the bones. Keep it up! |
Posted By: Filax_666
Date Posted: 12 September 2005 at 8:15am
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Maybe you could put some reflexes on the right part of the iris and of
the white part of the eye (thats where the light comes from right?) and erase that white line at the bottom of the black part. Otherwise is fantastic. Keep up. |
Posted By: Filax_666
Date Posted: 26 September 2005 at 1:56pm
i was realy looking forward to see some improvement here  i
know these things take their time but i still think you've probably done somethin n all this time... im just sayin this cause its a project i was realy loving to see and its been stopped for about 2 weeks... |
Posted By: Ensellitis
Date Posted: 27 September 2005 at 2:15pm
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She is like me, she got caught up in other projects... Lots to do. ------------- There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross. |
Posted By: Filax_666
Date Posted: 28 September 2005 at 8:45am
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Yeah, i understand she probably has lotsa things to do...i was just
sayin im hoping she shows us us some improvement soon, cause i was loving this... |
Posted By: Cryssy
Date Posted: 23 October 2005 at 11:01am
| hehehehe hope no more Filax ;) |
Posted By: Wannahlakujuu
Date Posted: 23 October 2005 at 1:36pm
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Nice update. The smile is a little awkward and looks a little unnatural. I have trouble with that too
edit: on second thought, maybe you don't even need the lips, or maybe just making them thinner. In stuff this style you can't really see defined lips. I think maybe them not being so red and being thinner would improve it a lot. ------------- I am Spartacus |
the shading on the lips looks nice though, and I am liking this a lot, just work on the shape of the lips.Posted By: Shark
Date Posted: 23 October 2005 at 4:19pm
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yeah, i think thin lips would add a better effect of scaryness as
opposed to slutty red-lipstickness  , this is coming along nicely
can wait for another update
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Posted By: Cryssy
Date Posted: 23 October 2005 at 4:27pm
| Can someone explain what you mean about the lips? I am willing to try things but I just am not understanding....this isn't really supposed to be scary |
Posted By: Shark
Date Posted: 23 October 2005 at 4:29pm
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i think they should be a bit thinner, they are very well shaded, but
you cold try a few different shapes |
Posted By: Cryssy
Date Posted: 23 October 2005 at 5:01pm
| ok cartoonish or realish? |
Posted By: Shark
Date Posted: 23 October 2005 at 5:37pm
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realsih, but try and stay with that cool style you've already got goin
on. |
Posted By: Cryssy
Date Posted: 23 October 2005 at 5:52pm
| well I am trying to merge cartoony, realistic, and animeish into one style because I draw that way pixels are a little different from paper |
Posted By: Shark
Date Posted: 23 October 2005 at 6:04pm
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well im digging it
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Posted By: Cryssy
Date Posted: 23 October 2005 at 6:50pm
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I am working on it expect an update sometime tonight
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Posted By: Wannahlakujuu
Date Posted: 24 October 2005 at 2:25pm
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Yes shark said it a little better than I did edit: and while it is not really supposed to be scary, the thin lips would add to the mysterious sortof eerie feel to the pic. ------------- I am Spartacus |
the lips should look real, but anime-ish as you said. can't wait for the update.