Graveyard WIP i guess
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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 08 September 2025 at 3:34am
Topic: Graveyard WIP i guess
Posted By: tripnfelt
Subject: Graveyard WIP i guess
Date Posted: 07 April 2009 at 11:06am
So I made a quick graveyard  and I didn't intend to do anymore on it but was told by some it was nice but needed stuff. I still have no idea about this aa stuff.... So what have I made better? what have I made worse?  Thoughts? Thanks for your constructive crit in advance |
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Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 07 April 2009 at 12:01pm
Zoom in :) ------------- |
Posted By: tripnfelt
Date Posted: 07 April 2009 at 12:05pm
| Wow thanks, you're rad! |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 07 April 2009 at 12:17pm
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thanks :) - My edit is to support what I said on the gallery- "Very nice overall. I think your colors could have been better chosen to help with smoothing the worst of the jaggies and still keep everything as is...sort of speak." ------------- |
Posted By: x-death
Date Posted: 10 April 2009 at 1:31am
| look at jalenso's peice how he improved it. thats exactly what you need to do, colors, methods of shading and improving. all of it! |
Posted By: tripnfelt
Date Posted: 11 April 2009 at 2:29am
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I intend to follow jals advice (I need new mouse batteries). still from what i did b4 are the highlights i was doing too bright/un-necessary. should the fox and rabbit stay? should i revert to the original background color? |