Red Armor
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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 14 September 2025 at 4:23am
Topic: Red Armor
Posted By: monotov
Subject: Red Armor
Date Posted: 10 May 2009 at 12:22pm
working on it since last two nights. |
Replies:
Posted By: ZeroFive1
Date Posted: 10 May 2009 at 2:35pm
| Hmm. The anatomy of the right chest seems a bit off. I'm not quite sure. |
Posted By: Dhr. Bosch
Date Posted: 10 May 2009 at 3:46pm
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his knees are too low and/or his legs are too short, and his feet look inhuman too me (this maybe intentional). the pose seems to be intended as a contraposto (counterpoise) but it needs some reshaping, take a look at this link for a good example: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Michelangelos_David.jpg. i like the mask, it makes it look alien. |
Posted By: monotov
Date Posted: 11 May 2009 at 4:56pm
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Thank you for tips, were of much help. And the helmet is actually made with the skull   |
Posted By: monotov
Date Posted: 14 May 2009 at 3:52pm
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Posted By: CommanderD97
Date Posted: 14 May 2009 at 6:39pm
| looking good, and getting better! can't wait to see the finished pic! |
Posted By: purpletree
Date Posted: 15 May 2009 at 3:34pm
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Don't u think the weapon loooks too straight compared to the actual alien??? maybe you should try putting in an angle or tilited??? coz it doesnt look like the alien is holding the weapon |
Posted By: Dhr. Bosch
Date Posted: 15 May 2009 at 3:55pm
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keep working on that counterpoise. the right leg (his left) is looking MUCH better but the other one could still use some tweeking. you should either get it in front of or behind the other because right now it just seems shorter. there is a good tutorial on posture here http://www.algarcia.org/AnimationPhysics/BalanceTutorial.pdf although it is made for animation the basic concept definitely aplies. the hand is very good but the weapon isn't at the right angle. i see much improvement. keep it up and this will be a beutifull piece |
Posted By: monotov
Date Posted: 17 May 2009 at 12:15pm
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New leg posture and fix the angle of the ax. thanks for the tutorial Dhr.Bosch   |