Classic Truck
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 10 September 2025 at 11:30pm
Topic: Classic Truck
Posted By: NEX44
Subject: Classic Truck
Date Posted: 25 June 2009 at 11:07pm
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Good evening, Im new to Pixel Joint, and pretty much pixeling in general. This is my first real creation, and its not done yet. It is obviously a work in progress, and this is just a small draft. I wanted to post it on here before I would color it so that I could fix any minor issues and apply any recommendations anyone has. But here it is, thats right a freakin' truck:  Here is my inspiration for this creation: http://pix.alaporte.net/pub/d/14870-1/Old+Truck.JPG - http://pix.alaporte.net/pub/d/14870-1/Old+Truck.JPG (As you can tell the back is a little off balance on purpose.) Thanks guys, NEX44  |
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Posted By: Fatalis67
Date Posted: 25 June 2009 at 11:33pm
A: You should straighten out the bed of the truck, it looks like the truck is turning and the bed is a trailer or something. I know its on purpose but I really think it would look much better without it. B: The wheels should line up along this line. |
Posted By: NEX44
Date Posted: 26 June 2009 at 1:52pm
Alright, Ive finished it. Ive fixed the back, the wheel, colored, shaded, and put in a nice background.  to  to  The only problem is the line on the windshield, i dont know if I should keep it curved like that or put it back to the way it originally was in the first draft. Please comment and give me suggestions! Thanks, NEX44 |
Posted By: Fatalis67
Date Posted: 26 June 2009 at 2:12pm
| Bring the windshield line back to how it was or get rid of it. |
Posted By: Hatch
Date Posted: 26 June 2009 at 2:15pm
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I preferred it when it was bent and falling apart. It looks too rigid now. Straight lines are overrated ------------- |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 26 June 2009 at 2:49pm
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I agree with Hatch on the straightness of it. I'd also add that perhaps leaving all the lineart in black is weak looking on this. Use the grey from the tires to color the line on the lightest of the red areas. and leave the black for the shadow sections. visual example of my comment (by iSTVAN) ../files/icons/full/car_small_colour4.gif">  ------------- |