Digimon, W.I.P.
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 11 September 2025 at 10:54pm
Topic: Digimon, W.I.P.
Posted By: UnHated
Subject: Digimon, W.I.P.
Date Posted: 09 July 2009 at 5:02pm
Currently it is missing a body, but I will get to that when the time comes. I like how it's going so far, c&c please. |
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Posted By: UnHated
Date Posted: 09 July 2009 at 5:12pm
 UPDATE |
Posted By: UnHated
Date Posted: 11 July 2009 at 1:57pm
| So, can any one give me c.c. on how to improve this image? |
Posted By: Hatch
Date Posted: 11 July 2009 at 2:28pm
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You've already submitted this to the gallery (twice). It gives people the impression you aren't going to work on it anymore, so they're less likely to spend time offering advice.
Anyway, I suggest lighter outlines with more color, especially where the light is hitting, I'd also make the eye shape less geometric and more natural. And maybe do a bit of antialiasing on the jaggy bits. IT's nice overall, I think it just needs some tweaking here and there. :D [EDIT] Also, you've got a ton of wasted and redundant colors--31 in total. You may want to do a bit of clean-up. ------------- |