second frame
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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 08 September 2025 at 10:42am
Topic: second frame
Posted By: skeddles
Subject: second frame
Date Posted: 10 July 2009 at 10:45pm
workin on the frame after for my comic  I just dont know about it at all. I want it to be as good as the other. She has to: -have a slightly different pose -Look surprized? feel free to comment about the first one also it sucks so far imo, but someone else is gonna have to tell me why 9_9 maybe I should post on pixelation also? I still want more opinions on the first one ------------- |
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Posted By: Manjaman
Date Posted: 11 July 2009 at 3:31am
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Sorry, but your bone really looks like a d*ck on the first frame. Is it intentional ? To make the surprise more obvious, you should make a falling tail on your first frame, and a rising one on the second. |
Posted By: ellie-is
Date Posted: 11 July 2009 at 8:11am
| Maybe add more white in the eyes as well. |
Posted By: skeddles
Date Posted: 12 July 2009 at 5:39pm
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Posted By: Hatch
Date Posted: 15 July 2009 at 7:05pm
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first page rescue GET
Can you explain the whole comic or is it a sekrit? And why did you suddenly include the daytime shading? What's going on there? I AM CONFUSED ------------- |
Posted By: ellie-is
Date Posted: 15 July 2009 at 7:22pm
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Maybe he was bored.
But like I said on msn, eyes need more white, or at least any lighter color. |
Posted By: skeddles
Date Posted: 16 July 2009 at 8:36pm
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Oh lol, I forgot to explain that here It's what the palette would look like if it was at daytime. But it's not. It's just an example. ------------- |