Tree C+C
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
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Printed Date: 11 September 2025 at 12:30pm
Topic: Tree C+C
Posted By: andrewmoquin
Subject: Tree C+C
Date Posted: 20 August 2009 at 1:05am
I've recently begun practicing spriting trees, a subject that I have always struggled with, even outside of pixel work. But just for once, I actually made a tree I'm somewhat happy with. Not to say it couldn't be better. Not at all! If anyone has Critique for me, be it for the even the grass/clouds, please don't hesitate to go all out.  ------------- http://www.rokstok.com - Engagement Rings | http://www.rokstok.com/wedding_bands.php?catid=18 - Wedding Rings | http://www.rokstok.com/rings.php - Rings |
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Posted By: Dhr. Bosch
Date Posted: 20 August 2009 at 12:38pm
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shading should be conentrated more too one side, as should the lighting. but generaly i like it.
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Posted By: cure
Date Posted: 20 August 2009 at 1:10pm
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nothing wrong with the light coming from above. right now you have the large, leafy forms down. but they're still obvious shapes. Break it up a bit with more leafy texture, less uniform shapes. and I'd use that highlight more. quick edit on the left side to show what I mean:  Overall looks great though. also, try not to start more than 1 WIP thread at a time (helps avoid clutter and ensures you'll focus on a particular piece)- or, alternately, put several pieces in a single thread. |